English literature dialogues.

Great writing can be the sexiest thing in the world. Give it a shot and describe the most erotic experiences - real or imaginary - right here.
Post Reply
User avatar
Nezhul
Experimentor
Experimentor
Posts: 2373
Joined: Fri Apr 30, 2010 6:22 am
Sexual Orientation: Straight

English literature dialogues.

Post by Nezhul »

I was wondering. Is it a standard to use apostrophes for dialogues in english literature? Because in my country the standart is of another kind.

Example:
In my country:
- Blabababa. Blalala, - he said, - Blalalalalala.
- Blalala, - she replied
He shrugged.
- Bla Bla Bla!

in English literature:
"Blabababa. Blalala," - he said, - "Blalalalalala."
"Blalala," - she replied
He shrugged.
"Bla Bla Bla!"

And my Pratchett books have another type:
'Blabababa. Blalala,' he said. 'Blalalalalala.'
'Blalala.' She replied.
He shrugged. 'Bla Bla Bla!'


so what is really the right way to write dialogues in English?
Check out my new site, and read SexTV story there!
Also I have the DARK section that features feature Erotic Horror.
I also launched a SubscribeStar recently! Please come check it out!
Updated whenever I feel like it. :wave: :love:
Image
Johnmaster
Explorer
Explorer
Posts: 26
Joined: Wed May 08, 2013 7:30 pm
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
I am a: Switch

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by Johnmaster »

It's the second one :)
The third version is usually used when quoting someone, the " mark is actually called a speech mark, and is reserved for speech.

If I'm wrong someone correct me.
John Master
Allow you
User avatar
les
Experimentor
Experimentor
Posts: 6126
Joined: Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:04 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual/Bi-Curious
I am a: Dom (Male)
Sub/Slave(s): My serfs
All 2 True is head Serf
Location: London England
Contact:

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by les »

                     


I was taught, some 50 years ago. to use "double quotes" for speech and 'single quotes' for contractions, eg doesn't for does not.

Since times have changed it appears 'single quotes' are for speech and double quotes to highlight a fact or object.

English is a living language changing with new words and ideas from other cultures. As well as slang.


                     
                                          Lord Les
                                 Be careful what you wish for!

Growing OLD Is Inevitable,
          But Growing UP... Is Optional
                    OR
                              Why do I have to stop being a KID now I can afford it.







                                
                                                                                                                                                   
User avatar
micheleFFS
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 316
Joined: Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:44 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Open to new ideas!
I am a: Switch
Dom/me(s): Not currently serving a Superior. I'd love to negotiate a contract to encourage my writing, as I've done in the past.
Any genuine females interested?
Location: Portland OR
Contact:

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by micheleFFS »

I've not heard or observed what Les said.

Written dialog, US English:

1. Put a person's exact words between double quotes. Include punctuation.
"Your place or mine?" he asked.

2. If the speaker's designation lies in the middle of the sentence, use double quotes for each section of direct speech and a comma at the end of the first direct speech and after the designation.
"I can't decide," she temporized, "unless I know more about your place."
(Compare to: "I can't decide unless I know more about your place," she temporized.)

3. If direct speech spans two or more paragraphs, use double quotes at the beginning of the speech, at the beginning of each subsequent paragraph, and at the end of the last paragraph of direct speech.
"My place," he bragged, "is at the top of that hill. The red mansion with the green roof.

"My bedroom has an eight foot circular bed with a trapeze and a mirror on the ceiling."

4. Designators are not always necessary; context may be enough.
"Get lost, creep!"

5. Put direct quotations within direct quotations between single quotes preceded by a comma. Capitalize the first letter of the embedded quotation.
"Then she told me, 'Get lost, creep,'" he complained indignantly.

6. When writing of a word as a word (instead of using it for its meaning) or when giving a definition in a sentence, set each between single quotes.
The word "sesquipedalious' means 'using big words.'

7. Apostrophes and single quotes look the same, but have very different functions. Apostrophes are for contractions like the apostrophe between the n and the t in 'doesn't.' 'Doesn't' gets single quotes in this context because it is being used as an example, hence the word is discussed as a word.

Seriously, look at extended dialog in any of my stories - or the other stories here. Nezhul, when I looked at your writing, I never noticed a problem with punctuating direct speech.

I'm very glad the writers here take their craft seriously.

Your obedient servant, former English teacher and still a professional writer,

micheleFFS
User avatar
Nezhul
Experimentor
Experimentor
Posts: 2373
Joined: Fri Apr 30, 2010 6:22 am
Sexual Orientation: Straight

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by Nezhul »

Interesting. Although Pratchett uses single quotes all the time. I wonder if British and US rules are different in that regard. I mean, Terry Pratchett was very smart and literate person, so he wouldn't use the wrong quotations, right?
Check out my new site, and read SexTV story there!
Also I have the DARK section that features feature Erotic Horror.
I also launched a SubscribeStar recently! Please come check it out!
Updated whenever I feel like it. :wave: :love:
Image
User avatar
micheleFFS
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 316
Joined: Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:44 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Open to new ideas!
I am a: Switch
Dom/me(s): Not currently serving a Superior. I'd love to negotiate a contract to encourage my writing, as I've done in the past.
Any genuine females interested?
Location: Portland OR
Contact:

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by micheleFFS »

I'm not familiar with Pratchet, let alone how he punctuates speech, so I can't comment on that.

British English and US English do have different conventions, but I'm not conversant in that either.

In the end, all punctuation is a collection of conventions. The important thing is to be consistent within the document. That's what aids communication.
philo
Explorer At Heart
Explorer At Heart
Posts: 831
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2012 3:10 pm
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Location: UK

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by philo »

Traditionally British English followed the same rules as micheleFFS quoted.

More recently double quotes and single quotes are used interchangeably.
Grammar has not been taught in UK schools in my life time (apart from basic literacy up to about age 10), in fact if you study English in the UK it is usually either a combination of literature and language (with the assumption you are going to not need many actual lessons to pass the language bit) or pure English literature.

A lot of people struggle with getting simple things like to, too and two correct, let alone the proper use of punctuation.
Fledrin
Explorer
Explorer
Posts: 47
Joined: Mon Jun 01, 2015 4:21 am
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by Fledrin »

micheleFFS wrote: In the end, all punctuation is a collection of conventions. The important thing is to be consistent within the document. That's what aids communication.
I think this is most important -- consistency. People will learn early on what your dialogue markers are whether they be -blabla- or 'blabla' or "blabla." I'm reading Dracula (Bram Stoker) right now, which uses the single quotes for normal dialogue and double quotes for quotations inside of dialogue. Although I'm used to seeing them as being reversed, it hasn't hindered me at all. If you're concern is mainly on making sure the readers understand you, then using single or double quotes won't matter much, as long as you stick to one system. However, if you want to use the method that's more common in today's books, I would say double quotes; almost all of the books I've read use double quotes, and all of them used the conventions MicheleFFS wrote. In America, at least, that's what you'll see most of the time.

On an unrelated note, I just noticed that this looks like an owl ---> (")
aimauanca
Explorer
Explorer
Posts: 88
Joined: Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:47 pm

Re: English literature dialogues.

Post by aimauanca »

I much appreciate this thread
Post Reply