Feedback: When strokers get busted... 1

[teazetoy]

Hi everyone,

I just put my first tease up; I'd appreciate any feedback you have.

All the best,

[teazetoy]

The loop on part 2 is now fixed - sorry!

[anonymister]

Sorry, but I have a few criticisms.

I got a bit bored waiting for the next page. And after getting to the computer to watch porn, the porn actress was not that attractive really, so I decided not to rate, but just canceled out.

I hope others liked it though.

[teazetoy]

Thanks to you both, and particularly for your substantive feedback anonymister.

I suppose it's just down to subjective preferences! I'm fairly certain that none of the timers are longer than 30 seconds, and a significant minority are only 15. I really dislike long timers myself so I'll keep that further in mind.

All the best,

[Trusfrated]

I thought they were both great!

It's hard to please everyone. She wouldn't have been my top choice for the model, but I love the storyline. In particular, I liked that you took the time to create multiple responses to the questions and gave each path (however short) well-thought dialog. More of these (with perhaps even longer paths) make for a really fun tease, in my opinion.

The "put in chastity by wife/gf for being naughty" scenario is pretty hot to me, so I hope you continue your story.

Like domtanya said (welcome back, btw! ), Keep it up!!!