I just have 2 other things to say and they are
1. Opps
2. Take pity on me, I'm typing this all left handed as I had surgery on the other last week.
Moderator: 1885

Thanks for this, I can't wait to see the others.png wrote:Ok I played quite a bit with the scripts and here the first one that work already well...

On line 34 "You now I only gives you what you want".. "now" should be "know," "gives" should be "give," you/your doesn't need to be capitalised (on the other lines) and all the exclamation marks shouldn't have spaces before them...png wrote:The loop of suffering. the dom will make you edge then CBT then start a loop with a random chance of either edge or CBT. the length of the loop is random between the level of the dom and level od the dom / ampathy. Meaning for a level 3 dom with 4 empathy between 3 and 12 rounds.

I am right there with you on that. Though I tend to be able to run through it once then go back and correct stuffMat wrote:One problem I have with scripts in general is that you have to read through them to see if you like them or just a quick proof read to fix spelling and other small mistakes, and by reading them you ruin the surprise, so when you notice the new script starting you then now exactly what's going to happen..
To be fair it's probably my fault.. the smaller the error the more it drives me mad
And it annoys me because they are petty mistakes and shouldn't bother me, yet they do, and it usually breaks my immersion..
For example,
On line 34 "You now I only gives you what you want".. "now" should be "know," "gives" should be "give," you/your doesn't need to be capitalised (on the other lines) and all the exclamation marks shouldn't have spaces before them...png wrote:The loop of suffering. the dom will make you edge then CBT then start a loop with a random chance of either edge or CBT. the length of the loop is random between the level of the dom and level od the dom / ampathy. Meaning for a level 3 dom with 4 empathy between 3 and 12 rounds.
Forgive me, it's just that when 1885 does an excellent job with spelling, errors seem to stand out more..
*hangs head in shame* I didn't choose to be a grammar nazi..![]()
Damn thank for the errors I try to proof read myself but I always miss some :(Mat wrote:One problem I have with scripts in general is that you have to read through them to see if you like them or just a quick proof read to fix spelling and other small mistakes, and by reading them you ruin the surprise, so when you notice the new script starting you then now exactly what's going to happen..
To be fair it's probably my fault.. the smaller the error the more it drives me mad
And it annoys me because they are petty mistakes and shouldn't bother me, yet they do, and it usually breaks my immersion..
For example,
On line 34 "You now I only gives you what you want".. "now" should be "know," "gives" should be "give," you/your doesn't need to be capitalised (on the other lines) and all the exclamation marks shouldn't have spaces before them...png wrote:The loop of suffering. the dom will make you edge then CBT then start a loop with a random chance of either edge or CBT. the length of the loop is random between the level of the dom and level od the dom / ampathy. Meaning for a level 3 dom with 4 empathy between 3 and 12 rounds.
Forgive me, it's just that when 1885 does an excellent job with spelling, errors seem to stand out more..
*hangs head in shame* I didn't choose to be a grammar nazi..![]()

Is the 1st one the same as the joi one that 1885's put in?png wrote: Dom goes afk and let you jerk on a joi video (afk for the duration of the video)
Dom goes afk for 30min and tells you to jerk by yourself in the meantime
Dom goes afk and gives you lines (3 set of lines all with #tags in them to make them changes)
Dom has to go indefinitly and gives you a chance to cum based on your orgasm setup
Dom has to go and put you in chastity without giving a chance to cum
+ a 50% chance the script skip and tells you to edge before going to the next one
Since the writing lines feature is broken it's pointless for the moment :(
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if no feminination flag Do you like feminization pet ? Yes -> set flag feminization on No -> set flag feminisation offelse if femnization flag on Do you have xxx element of clothing and set appropriate flagelse Still don't want to try some feminization ? It might be fun you know ;)endif 

Are you it's my script ? I only posted the stroke or chastity variation script and it's a link not a start script and I don't have a (mash) session in it :pmarspank wrote:Not sure if this is something wrong with the new patch, but I ran the open script you posted png and had this happen:
02:59 PM Amy: Swat that poor little dick with your palm a few times
02:59 PM John: done
03:00 PM Amy: Give me 5 good slaps on the head of your cock, make it sting
03:00 PM John: slapped Miss
03:00 PM Amy: Give your cock a few good smacks
03:00 PM John: done Miss
03:00 PM Amy: Oh, Hello John.
03:00 PM Amy: Sorry but I'm not in the best of moods today.
03:01 PM Amy: As your here perhaps you can help cheer me up. *smiles innocently*
It restarted the script after the first round of CBTCock in the (mash) section

same for memarspank wrote:Not sure if this is something wrong with the new patch, but I ran the open script you posted png and had this happen:
02:59 PM Amy: Swat that poor little dick with your palm a few times
02:59 PM John: done
03:00 PM Amy: Give me 5 good slaps on the head of your cock, make it sting
03:00 PM John: slapped Miss
03:00 PM Amy: Give your cock a few good smacks
03:00 PM John: done Miss
03:00 PM Amy: Oh, Hello John.
03:00 PM Amy: Sorry but I'm not in the best of moods today.
03:01 PM Amy: As your here perhaps you can help cheer me up. *smiles innocently*
It restarted the script after the first round of CBTCock in the (mash) section