Hello everybody! I've just posted my FIRST tease...
which is located in here: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3401
Like to hear about comments so all comments are invited!
Hope you like...
theguy
New Tease:"First Day With The New Mistress"
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flyingKiltSlave
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Re: New Tease:"First Day With The New Mistress"
congrats on writing your first tease.
the pics are good, the general story is good, but the grammatical errors really take away from the effect.
the pics are good, the general story is good, but the grammatical errors really take away from the effect.