Nikki
all2true wrote:Hmmm
The intro page was a bit spartin
Oh and the words were off the right side of my screen
so I had a bit of difficulty reading the first letter of each
sentance was:
ike this.
also, what's with the big blue swirl on the top left?
Is that for hypnotism later?
or did you liked the design? (if so why is it not on the second page?)
I sugest adding a photo somewhere on the front page (either a women, or sub male)
this looks more like a blog site than a web-porn site
just one photo would be enough to intrest me, even if it is more of a blog.
Could you also play up what your are promising?
"If your not looking to be feminized to the point of looking like a girl in 2 -6 months then really there is not much for you here."
I would re-word this sentance, this does not sound dominate enough, my suggestion:
Male slaves will learn and be converted to a femine appearence in just 2-6 months! ( you don't have to talk about the not much here, because only those who want to will come, the exclusion is superflous, not needed. People will exlude themselves based on ther unwillingness.
"Unless of course you are a girl. In that case there is much to do here, mainly exploring your dominant side and learning the skills of the trade."
reword, my suggestion:
Dominate women are welcome to join in the fun and excitement of learning how to keep male slaves!
"There has bee some confusion over the gallery page so let me illustrate. The gallery link goes to your gallery"
Hunh? There has beeN some confusion/ how are you illistrating this idea?
do you mean: You will have a gallery link in your personal gallery, so no worries
OR
The gallery link is a part of my gallery program and a link is included once you sign on.
The Link to Harlock
gives me an error unless
I am logged in, this link should be present even when I am not logged in
I am wonder why can't I tell Harlock unless I log in? Error 99, I think was the error
"Oh and if your experiencing registration problems the site reportedly works on these browsers accordingly.
Perfectly: mozilla firefox2, 3, Safari 3
Nicely: I. Explorer 7, Opera 9
Barely: I. Explorer 6
Not working: any browser without javascript enabled, readers for blind people"
Please reword this, again this is my humble suggestion:
If you are exeriencing registration difficulties the Mistress is willing to inform you that the best browsers for this site are: Mozilla, ect
Also Explorer 7 and Opera 9 are working nicely
However Explorer 6 or browsers without javascript do not work as well.
(don't mention the bit about the visually impared, because they will not be able to log on, so why tell people they will not be able to?)
In summary
if I was going to be feminized
it would have to be a strong dominate women
Be bold, be athoritiative!
