Feedback: Your wife is back from her vacation

[slaveashish]

Hi guys,

Wrote this tease a long time back. Decided to make it presentable and publish it.

While only a small and really simple tease, I did struggle a lot to roll out the final version. After writing this tease I have a huge appreciation for the efforts put in by many of the authors here. You guys rock!

All feedback, especially the presence of any bugs, is welcome and appreciated as I am looking forward to writing more teases in the near future.

[mr-max]

I like the model and the tonallity. Does it really and with "You can start stroking it bitch, but do it really slow"? It feels a bit strange for an ending. Or is it a bug?

Cheers

[slaveashish]

I like the model and the tonallity. Does it really and with "You can start stroking it bitch, but do it really slow"? It feels a bit strange for an ending. Or is it a bug?

Cheers

Yes it is a bug. I checked an offline version which I had downloaded previously and that one definitely did not have the bug, but somehow the Nyx script got corrupted. Anyway, since I had the previous xml I was able to generate the Nyx scipt very quickly with the Offline editor and update the tease online. It should be working correctly now. Thanks for the feedback.