Feedback: Edging Triathlon

[dragoul]

And I don't want to just give the user 4 options each time. Eventually, he will just do trial and error or even worse: in memory segments he can memorize the buttons instead of the numbers.

And there is another problem with those 4 options kind of questions. You can "cheat" quite easily by just looking at the last digits

e.g.: 764772*56573

A) 43265446356
B) 45757588574
C) 54433884488
D) 86855444855

Looking at just the last digits of the question gives you 2*3 which is 6 and you know that the correct answer is A because it's the only option ending with a 6. Cheating could be prevented if the last digits of the options were all 6 though...

[itslate]

Yup, true :)

That's what I did with the math games in your links. Ariel was naked in no time :p

[supermokkori]

Without offending recent Flashtease authors (of course by saying that, they'll probably take offense) I found your this Flashtease as one of the better Flashteases to come along and well within my taste.

I actually like the various speeds of the "stroke to the beat" segments - you really don't know what to expect in terms of stroke rhythm for the first few times you play through it. I would actually add maybe four more stroke beat files and randomize what plays when appropriate.

The girls you used, all quite hot, good selection there.

Of the very few criticisms:

Story - Fairly minor, but I would've liked a bit more story setup

Stroking to "other materials" - While I know you designed part of the stroking segments so the user would chose other material to tab out to watch, I'm not a fan of that. I'm of the belief is that when you start a Flashtease, you're drawn into some alternate fantasy world that is completely self-enclosed; to then switch to another application or another tab creates a disconnect (not to mention, when you're busy with your "hands" a little distracting).

Other than that very well done, itslate. Also, when you have time, please reply to my private message.

[itslate]

That's high praise from an awesome content creator

Your totally right about the story. At first I wanted to have all the girls pictures to be set in a sport-scenario. I wanted a picture of the judges and do something with the head of judges more. But I didn't find (or look long enough for) hot pictures in sport scenarios and then just focused on the mechanical sides of the tease. If I magically came along a few perfect picture sets, I would have done more story for sure.
I also kinda did the tease for myself initially, and I am still retrying the Triathlon on a regular basis. And I don't need a story for that.

Spoiler: show

Even the talk about whether I might cum is a bit of a turn off, because I know the outcome.

About the other material: In my first tease, 10 Ten minutes, there was criticism that there wasn't enough hot material in that. Seeing as I wanted some longer stroking segments, especially in the beginning, I thought I'd make it crystal clear that you may/should use porn during them. Still, as the girls tell you, they are perfectly fine with you just staying in the tease and looking at them.

[itslate]

I was pretty surprised that this tease got such a positive feedback, mainly because it contains what I call ballooning and I haven't seen a lot of that on this site.

Did you like this edge holding technique? Were the segments too long or too short?

What I like most about this, is that it's clear when you fail: If you need more fingers in order to stay close, you fail.
When there's just the intruction to hold the edge, you can play it safer and closer to the edge. With this ballooning, you can't.

[Oldiwer]

As I wrote before I like you tease very much. Especially the balooning section is very tough. I failed the first time on the second stage while ballooning. Going back from one finger to the full hand was to much and I had to ruin an orgasm.

There are a few things that could be done better in my opinion:

- If you have to do the repeated edging there could be a better variety in the pictures. If you have to repeat edges 5-10 times with the same picture it gets a bit boring. You could use a few random pictures, so that the picture changes after each edge.

- When I do the edging and stopping in part 2, I always concentrate on the clock, because I have to wait until half of the time has run down. I can't focus on the pictures. I would prefer the pages to skip from "Stroke to the Edge" to "Stop" over and over again.

[itslate]

Yep, the full hand is mean, but I love the feeling.

- Variety in the pictures would have been nice, but I don't know how to do random pics from a subset of your pictures. I wouldn't have wanted to chose a pic randomly, but from that girl specifically.

- I can actually keep track of the timer with peripheral vision mostly and I don't think two pages change too much in the experience. But yeah, ultimately that was laziness. Also, pages would have changed so fast, I think it would have been difficult to read the text, too.

[LipstickLover]

Man, this was a really awesome tease, very well done. One of my favorites for sure. Right now I've gone 22 days without cumming and it made this tease all the more challenging and satisfying to complete. Seems like this would have taken a lot of work and time to create, great job with this, thank you!

I personally enjoyed the aspect of being able to pull up your own material during the stroking portions, it definitely made it harder which is always more fun

Spoiler: show

One thing that I had in mind while I was doing this is that I immediately noticed that there was no mention of if the player was going to have a chance to cum or not until well within the tease. I think you could have built some more excitement from the beginning and added to the denial factor if you had led the player into thinking that there would be a chance to cum at the end. With that being said, I personally agree with your decision to have the players denied at the end of such a challenging tease, so hot.]

Also, freakin' great choice in models, those women were absolutely sexy.

Probably my favorite part about this tease is the flexibility you give to the player to make the game more challenging, such as encouraging them to hit the foul button to restart, as well as the sexy suggestions at the end to make the tease harder the next time through.