My First Tease

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hi ' my little worm' was my first tease
tell me what you think any constructive criticism would be great thanks
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[all2true]

First, I must say
welcome!

Not bad for a first try.
The Model was very Hot.

Two problems. The tease was very short.
(did you have trouble finding more pictures?)
Some of the instructions,
How can I stroke fast AND say a whole sentance? for each stroke?
Slow strokes would have worked better.

Suggetion:
If you are going for a stroking tease, Then have more strokes before an edge (250 to 1000)
Also the instructions on the last page, I was a bit confused
I can cum two days from now? Or cum now and wait two days to do so again?
PS. Two days is not very long.

Hope it does not sound like I am being negetive
because I really did like the tease very much,
Great first try.

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thank you All2true for those words of advice, i tried to incorporate them into my new tease Mistress Stylish.