Thought part 2 was wonderful for all the same reasons - thanks for writing!
I will have to suck it up and actually do these Write For Me tasks. I have been just reading them as a story, but I feel like earning it, haha.
Looking forward to more. I'm a fan.
Feedback: A Day In The Life + Part 2
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quietlisten
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Re: Feedback: A Day In The Life + Part 2
Really, really well done tease. There are a few elements that are particularly effective from a psychological perspective:
1) Doing menial tasks (writeforme) creates an emotional investment in the Domme. For service submissives in particular (*raises hand*), this is very hot.
2) Once I figured out what the writeforme page did (while I was typing and seeing statistics updated moment-to-moment at the bottom), I registered with the site and re-started the task. The sensation of having my activity and performance tracked and monitored almost to the keystroke deepened the investment in and obedience to the Domme. Mistakes and frustration actually deepen this sense of subservience.
3) The picture activity forces the participant to wrestle with his cuckolded status and remove himself from the sexual equasion while still being of service to the Domme. For submissives who like being put so clearly in a beta role (*raises hand again*), this is exquisite.
I agree with others that this tease is well written and the consistent images help to create a cohesive story. But the psychological depth is what makes it stand out. There are not many teases that do this good of a job of harnessing the submissive mind. I look forward to the next part with eager anticipation.
QL
1) Doing menial tasks (writeforme) creates an emotional investment in the Domme. For service submissives in particular (*raises hand*), this is very hot.
2) Once I figured out what the writeforme page did (while I was typing and seeing statistics updated moment-to-moment at the bottom), I registered with the site and re-started the task. The sensation of having my activity and performance tracked and monitored almost to the keystroke deepened the investment in and obedience to the Domme. Mistakes and frustration actually deepen this sense of subservience.
3) The picture activity forces the participant to wrestle with his cuckolded status and remove himself from the sexual equasion while still being of service to the Domme. For submissives who like being put so clearly in a beta role (*raises hand again*), this is exquisite.
I agree with others that this tease is well written and the consistent images help to create a cohesive story. But the psychological depth is what makes it stand out. There are not many teases that do this good of a job of harnessing the submissive mind. I look forward to the next part with eager anticipation.
QL