The Final Test FB Thread

[frankendude]

Post your feedback and error reports to this thread. Hope it's not too hard a tease!

Edited. Original release had some problems with audio files not playing and an infinite loop. All issues have been fixed. If you played this tease earlier on the day it was released and ran into those problems, please try it again.


This tease is fairly light on the femDOM aspect of this site. There is no cbt, pain, humiliation, etc. You simply get to stroke for two beautiful women, and they tell you how. It starts off pretty slow, and you end up edging a good amount. It was my initial desire to place "cumming" buttons throughout at least the second half of the tease, but due to issues with the nyx editor I ended up not messing around with that. I hope to make another tease using the offline editor at some point, which should assist with those problems. If anyone has any suggestions for improvements I'm more than willing to entertain them for a possible re-release with improvements. This is my first tease, so I'm still getting the hang of the creative process.

[LeonhartGR]

It cycles for infinity when in the in the beginning of the second girl after her 1st or 2nd instruction.

[frankendude]

Found the error and it's corrected. Should work now.

[LeonhartGR]

Aight! Nice tease! Why can't I vote?

[frankendude]

Ummm, good question. I have no idea.

[DannyP]

Gave this a try just now and the tease is well written with a good choice of pictures (bar one which will be mentioned) and lasts a good period of time overall.

I would change the 45 second and 1 minute timers in the first part of the tease to be 15 secs shorter respectively. Early on the tease is rather boring and to me it drags on. 45 secs or more spent looking at the same picture used to be fine but now it leaves me rather frustrated that things are moving slowly. Also consider whether you want all hidden timers or not, it seemed like timers would appear on random pages. Personally I prefer visible timers but hidden ones are good in the right circumstances (like when a tease asks you to ride an edge for example).

I disliked the choice of the Tera Patrick picture when asked to edge for the first time, it seemed like the worst picture in the tease and that was disappointing.

I felt like the tease ended a bit abruptly, after the edging with Bryci it seemed natural to then go onto doing a bit of edging with Tera before finishing, its unusual for a good tease on this site to bring about a fast conclusion so it definitely caught me off guard.

I hope these notes are helpful to you in some way, I'm currently very slowly trying to put together my first tease so I appreciate how tricky getting everything together can be. Just remember if you like the timings and choice of pictures, etc with your tease, then keep it as is since your opinion is the most important one!

[frankendude]

Thanks for the feedback Danny. I did feel like after the tease was made that those timers were a bit too long and decided to go with 45sec timers at most from now on. I'm not sure that I agree that the first edge with Tera is a poor picture. It's maybe not the best picture in the bunch, but I still felt like it was pretty good. As far as the tease ending prematurely, that happened for a couple reasons. I wanted to make the tease longer, but was having some major issues using the nyx editor. It does NOT like longer teases. I also intended Bryci to finish you off when you didn't expect it. The hope was that it made people feel like they lost a control a bit, but maybe the implementation wasn't as good as it could have been.


Good luck with your first tease! I'm probably minutes away from releasing my second one, and feel like I learned a lot from the first experience. I definitely recommend writing/typing out what the text, timers, and metronome beats will be for each screen. No images or coding. Really helped me streamline the process and junk out the bad ideas.

[travoltaxxx]

Hi!

Thank you for your wonderful Tease!!

Does anyone know why this Tease isn`t on the Milovana HTML 5 Site? Would be very nice´, if it would work on tablet!

Greets