I thought I'd start a thread for feedback on my latest tease. It's only my second ever published (the first is in the archive as #69 Janna and Nikki). Your comments are appreciated.
I though it was really good, the girl was hot and so was the text. I must say though, the end was kind of disappointing, i was ready to actually go on in. I think it would be awesome if you made it into a series, mabye a few days long or something, where we actually go inside the temple for some torture. Thanks for the great tease.
I was hoping for 1 ( or more ) follow up teases when you get into the temple. the pic set you used for this one was great, more of the same girl would be great or a different girl.
Well I guess I am gonna have to start scouring for an appropriate picture set to do a follow up, if anybody else happens upon an interesting set that could work for a scene inside the temple, please let me know. Thanks.
I thought it was great and definitely worthy of a follow-up. I want to go into the temple man. Goddess type pictures would be cool. I liked the whole them of beautiful Goddesses, worship, feminine power, etc.