wowidk121 wrote:When is part two comingggg out?!???? Lol
It's out now!
jayjaysub wrote:I've always enjoyed your teases.. they are some of the best on the site.
With that said, if you want constructive criticism, I thought that the same pictures were on too long... more changes of photos would intensify the feeling.
PinkDKB wrote:Someone mentioned that the picture doesn't change very often and while I agree that slightly more changes would be a benefit, it can be hard to get access to sets like this.
It definitely can be hard to get access to sets like this. As a rule I only use promo sets when making teases. Usually I can find a couple different promos of the same set and get 25-30 pictures out of it. That's been much more difficult with this model, as all the promo sets I've found have been identical. She's too good not to use for the role though, so I'm working the story as best I can around the limited photos I have.
PinkDKB wrote:The only notable criticism I can offer is that, contrary to what other people have said, I don't like the autotimer of most of the story. I don't know if I read much more quickly than is average, but the wait timer for every little sentence was incredibly painful to me - especially as there were so many consecutive sentences. An option to continue without waiting for the timer would have allowed me to read the text and not sit around waiting afterwards.
jackstock wrote:Agreeing with Pink.... I always find that 1885 teases have way too long of a wait time on each picture.
such impatience, I know.
Ironically enough I'm right there with you about not liking to wait too long between slides on a tease. One of the things about the format I created is that it takes control out of your hands for a very long time in order to create the illusion of constant dialogue.
The general speed I use has been fine-tuned over the course of the teases I've done, even if it doesn't seem like it sometimes.
The pace I use is aimed more at the part of the viewer who's stroking, not at the part of him who's reading. It's not really meant to move along at reading speed, it's meant to let the conversation have flow and tension. I try not to ever let it drag, but I always want anticipation and apprehension to be a part of the flow.
I don't know if there's a perfect solution for people who just don't like waiting for words to change, but if my teases moved at a perfect reading clip I think they would lose half their tension.
bribrookings wrote:I think this tease is absolutely brilliant!!
Subbylocked wrote:I agree, it is a very good tease
Ryuzaki wrote:I found this amazing and fun to read
fenway wrote:I love it!
edgehammer wrote:Such an amazing tease and so wonderfully put together!!!
basil731 wrote:An absolutely brilliant tease
janmb wrote:Brilliant writing as always
Mr-Elusive wrote:Great tease!
Frozen88 wrote:Great work
jamestabbycat wrote:Great tease! Waiting for the next one
Thanks a lot guys, I really appreciate it!
I'll keep working hard to get more chapters out.
rockiesresident wrote:1885's at it again - fantastic!
Thanks a lot, rockies! I'm just sad to say this looks like one of those times I won't be able to fit a character's wife into the storyline.
