Orgasmic Drugs - Feedback

[john_lemmings]

Hi everyone, as you may already know the 'Orgasmic Drugs' webtease was my first tease.
> http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=11572 <

I know it may have been a bit over the top for some people, but I just wanted to see what you thought of it as a tease overall.

[john_lemmings]

Any feedback?

[inferiorwhiteboi]

Just went through it, and I've got a couple thoughts.

Note: I've done a ton of edging today in my spare time, so I'm feeling sore & stroked out at the moment. So I read, but didn't "do" the tease, and I didn't cum (obviously).

Two thumbs up regarding the language used; I love it when I'm stroking and I'm referred to as a bitch, worthless & so forth. That definitely is a breath of fresh air compared to some teases which just say "you" or whatever. Also, varying the terms was a nice touch. It gets repetitive when some teases pick one term & use it on each page.

Nice job mixing in a little cbt. That'll please cbt fans, and it was mild enough that even a non-cbt guy would (hopefully) give it a try. Nipple play was a nice touch, too...and short enough that the timid would probably try it.

I liked the variety of pictures. Pretty stimulating, too. I got hard even though I wasn't stroking.

That ought to cover the positives. Now for the other side of the coin...

Regarding page 3: I'm not hung like a horse, hence the name 'inferiorwhiteboi'. Stroking with one hand while palming with the other, would be a little challenging...at least for me. Too much goin' on, in too small of an area.

About the ending...

Spoiler: show

The ending caught me by surprise. Some days, I have enough trouble swallowing my cum, though I have done it my fair share of times. I'm pretty sure that a lot of guys won't even swallow their jizz, so I don't think too many guys are brave enough to try Madam Sofia's suggestion.

And honestly, I gotta wonder if snorting cum would cause a sinus infection.

[john_lemmings]

Thanks for the reply;
Your pro-points are good for letting me know hat i'm doing correctly :)

As for the cons, I totally agree with you. I need to take safety into account, the ending may have been a bit uncalled for :P

[inferiorwhiteboi]

You're welcome. Hopefully you get some more feedback.

Good luck with your future teases! I'm still sorting out ideas for my first.

[john_lemmings]

I hope so.
Good luck to you as well. I'm sure you're first tease will be great.

[BiAnalBoy]

Hi there!!
I just whant to thank you for this tease!!
I love it and did it a few times now...
The cum snorting thing is the kick I was searching for... and I just love the smell of it for hours!!

I would like to have mor cum snorting teases.

Your
BiAnalBoy