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Hello Fellow Milovanians,

I just finished creating a rather time consuming tease and since it is in NYX Flash Tease format that I prefer to work in, it can not be rated, I am looking for a little feedback.

Good or bad, let me have it, that is the only way I will be able to improve my teases.

The tease is "NDW - Choose Your Torture Mistress Game"

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i liked it, but i chose one of the mistresses and when i got to the end i expected to go back to "game show" to pick another

or... as part of game show have "challenges" and if you pass the challnges you might get to cum at the end of the game show

i'm planning on making a FLASH tease as well, soon tho

thanks

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drip wrote:i liked it, but i chose one of the mistresses and when i got to the end i expected to go back to "game show" to pick another

or... as part of game show have "challenges" and if you pass the challnges you might get to cum at the end of the game show

i'm planning on making a FLASH tease as well, soon tho

thanks

drip
Thanks Drip,
I will consider that in the future.
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well Harriet was pretty awesome !!!
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Thanks Whacker44.

I appreciate the info.
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I liked the tease it was very very good. It would be interesting if a slave could provide a climaxs for the Mistress the more climaxes the slave gives the better the chance the slave gets to cum. Each Mistress could have a minimum number of climaxes that must be obtianed before the slave gets to cum. Each time the slave must edege and hold the edege before the Mistress cums. :\'-( :\'-( :\'-(

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Just not my cup of tea.
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Brilliant. Loved it!
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JelloBoy wrote:Just not my cup of tea.

I appreciate the honesty! Thanks for the input

What is your cup of tea, or what specifically did you not like? Just want to try to improve my creations.
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chastityslave wrote:Brilliant. Loved it!
Glad you liked it, thank you.
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slavecbt2000 wrote:I liked the tease it was very very good. It would be interesting if a slave could provide a climaxs for the Mistress the more climaxes the slave gives the better the chance the slave gets to cum. Each Mistress could have a minimum number of climaxes that must be obtianed before the slave gets to cum. Each time the slave must edege and hold the edege before the Mistress cums. :\'-( :\'-( :\'-(

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A lot of work, but I love that idea!!!!! Give me a few months, you may see one like that.

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