FB: Edge of Desire

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This is one of the best teases out there in my opinion. Here are my reasons (sorted by priority):

- Very challenging and long
- Gorgeous women
- Nice "smacktalk" by the women, teasing you with how far you have to go and how you won't make it
- Pretty much only stroking and edging, everything else was only optional.
- Safepoints: Edge too quickly and you are not out, but have to restart the last segment
- Passwords

The only thing is that the difficulty didn't really seem to increase, but maybe that is just me, round 2 was very hard compared to round 4 for instance.

I would really like to see more teases like this. Bring on the challenge, the gorgeous women and the smacktalk!
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Thank you very much for the feedback!

As this was my first tease, I tried to combine elements that I have personally enjoyed most from the great work of others. I was going for variety from one girl to the next rather than increasing difficulty but, if there is enough interest, I could make another one with a different challenge.

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Wow, great Tease.

This one of the best teases I tried in the last time.
Although it is long, it gets not boring. It attracs you by the good selection of girls, by the diversity of beats and edges and the teasing words. I especially like the accelarating beats and the overdrives.

I would appreciate if you do more teases like that.

Maybe you could try to add some other sounds, like orgasmic moaninng or hot instructions to encourage you. As I like ruind Orgasms in teases I would like to see the option at the end of each round. Or even the possibility to go on after you couldn't hold it any longer and had to ruin once during the tease.
But these are my personal preference.

I have on little request. Could you please make a Teasme version of this. I will be even better with high quality pictures.

Go on with your style and bring us more fun and pain.
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A really great tease! I only found some minor bugs:
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- Two instruction pages in round four don't appear at all: round402c and round403.
- The "EDGE" button on pages where you're told to edge/hold it doesn't really make sense.
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Thanks for catching the bugs!
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Lines 402c and 403 are fixed and now show up where they should. I have also removed the Edge buttons from the 'Edge and Ride' pages in round 4.
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Usually a lurker but just had to post to say that this is easily one of the best teases here.

Incredible work!

Great dialogue and mood. Perfect difficulty level. Amazing experience.

My only few nitpicky comments for future reference are:
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1 - agree with above post that edge buttons on pages where you're holding are strange

2 - it made me uncomfortable that game ending buttons like ruin and quit we're right next to buttons I had to use often. I kept worrying I'd click them by mistake. Not sure if you have flexibility in layout and could space them out a bit more...

3 - the ending felt very sudden after how great the flow was throughout the whole thing leading up to that. I was expecting the last (first) girl to drag it out a bit more in the final build up and perhaps have one more final challenge. At least to keep me guessing for a few minutes longer. And then once the verdict is doled out, some final in-character mocking/teasing etc would wrap it up nicely.

4 - it was strange that there was no accountability on the timed or hidden timer pages. No punishment for miscalculating the time or not finishing in time... This just slightly lifted the feeling of control there for a bit...
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Indeed a great tease! Thanks LeadingEdge! I especially like how the metronome sound is a "thump," rather than a distracting "beep." The softer the better, imho. Holly is beautiful, and Anastasia reminds me of Elisha Cuthbert. (which is a good thing!)

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You're welcome. You all are encouraging me to work on my next project!

I have fixed a few more pages in Edge of Desire so they will display correctly in TeaseMe offline.

Please keep the comments coming!
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This is the best tease I've seen since discovering Milovana! It reminds me of Tara Tainton's superb Cock Hero Challenges and Masturbation Marathons.

Would it be possible to convert Edge of Desire to OFFLINE for use in TeaseMe? :w00t: I would LOVE to have this game for offline enjoyment.

If so, it would be great if it could have HD pictures, of the same girl or not, and maybe some indication of progress through the entire game. I still don't know how long it runs for.

Thanks for this game and try to make more like this!

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Just played your tease and I must say, it's awsome.
Especially the second round was great, cause I'm a big fan of edging :w00t:

Great work! :love:
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Does anyone know the name of the models?

Especially the brunettes in round 2 and 4.
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