"Slave Jenny" tease

[bigjohn_36]

Hi all,

Just posted my first tease and I'd like some feedback. Let me know what you think or if you have ideas for improvement. Ideas for follow-up teases would be good too. Thanks

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=2735

[liljake]

Great tease! Try to avoid spelling mistakes if possible...

[eteased]

Thanks for taking the time to build a tease and share it with the group. It was great to see someone else using that metronome!

Some ideas for a follow-up tease:

Jenny is bad again, and Cassandra invites you back. This time she uses the clothespins on you and makes you assume a variety of positions as well.

Jenny is bad again, and Cassandra invites you back. This time Cassandra uses a strapon on you while you watch Jenny get punished by some guy.

Jenny is out of town for a few days, so Cassandra invites you over to fill in as the maid.

Cassandra invites you over to watch as she interviews some new "maids"

[bigjohn_36]

Thanks for the feedback.

I will check on the spelling mistakes. I did use a word processor...hopefully it's not too bad.



Thanks for the ideas for follow-up stories.

[bitemyass]

GREAT Tease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wasn't able to complete without, you know, but what a tease! I have tried again the next day and was able to reward myself for getting further. Great tease ...

[Jsub2007]

Great tease one of my all time favourites Keep up the good work.