LIfe Changed

[needcntrl]

Hi, i am new here, well when i say new, i mean new to forums :p, i have created a webtease by the name "Life Changed", Its my first exp. creating , so i didnt know how long, the english might not be that good as its not my first language,


but if you like the concept and want me to make more i will give it my best shot. give me some advices too

Thanks


here is the link
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=23540

[Mind]

Hi,

I liked the flashtease, it was pretty cool, and I'm looking forward to the next ones.

Just one thing though: some pages were skipping too fast, and I didn't have time to read everything.

[needcntrl]

hey thanks eric.. i will try to keep your advice in my mind for the next tease...

salamando.. yea i am great fan of his work
aslo try reading some PF.DEE , the work is good there aswell :)

[needcntrl]

hey thanks eric.. i will try to keep your advice in my mind for the next tease...

salamando.. yea i am great fan of his work
aslo try reading some PF.DEE , the work is good there aswell :)

needcntrl,

What is PF.DEE?

oh sorry he is another writer specializes in sex magic etc. try "googling smashword pf dee",, his work is also good