Since this is my first tease I´d love to hear some feedback!
Hope I managed to give something back to this community!
Model:
Cassia Riley
*kisses*
Varayez
Feedback for Two Faces#1
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Varayez
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Feedback for Two Faces#1
The kiss originated when the first male reptile licked the first female reptile, implying in a subtle, complimentary way that she was as succulent as the small reptile he had for dinner the night before.
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Quazwierdcev283
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Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
nice job. Even though I'm the first to reply you're tease currently has a rating of almost four whole stars (none of the teases have five stars) that's better than my first and currently only tease (I am still working on the sequel but with college and stuff . . .)
Anyway, congrats looking forward to the next one.
Anyway, congrats looking forward to the next one.
Quaz.
Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
loved your tease " 2 faces "
Please Write a follow up... Im hooked !
Yours C100
Please Write a follow up... Im hooked !
Yours C100
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Varayez
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Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
Thank you Chris 100!!! <3
I´m sure looking forward to writing a follow-up and I am already on it.
love
Slut Varayez
I´m sure looking forward to writing a follow-up and I am already on it.
love
Slut Varayez
The kiss originated when the first male reptile licked the first female reptile, implying in a subtle, complimentary way that she was as succulent as the small reptile he had for dinner the night before.
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HogtiedCowboy
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Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
Just did that tease *again*. I really liked it, lots of edging...
Cant wait to read the conclusion.
HogtiedCowboy
Cant wait to read the conclusion.
HogtiedCowboy
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SilentRain
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Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
Yeah we're waiting it 
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cumhardy
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Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
I liked this, although for some reason I dont usually go for teases where the models are outside, dont know why...
Bring on part 2 Im worried what she has in store!
Bring on part 2 Im worried what she has in store!
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willbeg2cum
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Re: Feedback for Two Faces#1
I know this thread has been dead a while, but I just read this tease and I really like it. It is fun and interesting; and yes, not like one of those grocery list teases. I think it's great.
Varayez, I think you did a great job, and you've found a beautiful model. Will you ever write the sequel?
Varayez, I think you did a great job, and you've found a beautiful model. Will you ever write the sequel?
Good things come to those who wait.