Happy Birthday Princess

[HogtiedCowboy]

Please leave any and all feedback.

Thanks

[all2true]

May I also wish a Happy birthday as well.

Being from the midwest
I loved the cowboy theme
Great picks!

A bit short
but still a nice
quick birthday wish.

[Mz_Teneale]

Hiya hogtied... I should of known you would write a cowboy webtease

I thought it was pretty good. It was short but i was there in the chat when you were handed this assignment, so i know the circumstances you were in.

I love kate, i think she is gorgeous (besides here weird foot). You could have gone into more detail text wise i think, im not a huge fan of "get to the edge now" phrases, especially in your tease, i think by memory you used it on the third page. Webteases should slowly build the reader up and up until he cant help but edge.

I especially liked the way the tease didnt end once the reader came. Im a big fan of that and my next tease may include a bit of that.

I gave it a 3 out of 5 ... Well done on such short notice!

[HogtiedCowboy]

Thank you Mz_Teneale,

One for honoring me by even reading my tease, and two for leaving feedback for me to improve.

I will certainly take the criticisms into account on my next tease...maybe it will elicit a 4 from you?

Humbly,
HogtiedCowboy