Your choice! Feedback

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Re: Your choice! Feedback

Post by elvisomar »

Oh dear... I just started Your Choice, and chose Nina. I had to quit to run an errand, but oh dear, she is evil. Thanks for the teast, domTanya. I look forward to exploring more of it.
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OMG! You are making teases again! Loved this one and all of your others. Please tell me that you are going to be making some more soon. I have been waiting for your return to the Webtease world. :lol:
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LOve the tease
Can't wait to try more of it, so far I have only done Jenny and let her decide, So now I frustrated, humiliated and wanting more.

Thank you Dom Tanya :blush:
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Fantastic! So glad to see you back.

Really like what I've seen so far. Such a neat little selection of teases - great selection for the tease-ee on the go, or for a sub who knows what they want and wants to get straight to the point. Though, from what I've seen from the selections so far, that doesn't limit the power of the scripted Dom.

Only had the chance to go through one today - chose "You". I'm a fan of some CBT more than I care to admit, even though I'm a bit of a softy (ha!). So this little bit was great. Don't want to give away any particular spoilers (as I realize anyone who reads these may not have done any of them), but the two parts really augmented each-other. The one got me primed, and the other was a tough frustrating mix. And it wasn't too long, which I would expect of a "choose your own". Of course, the end was particularly frustrating, but I think it was well polished.

In terms of constructive feedback - I have no idea how long the other teases are (yet!) but you could experiment with even longer lengths as well. When there are teases designed to give me categories of "what I want", it's nice to have an idea of length as well. Now I only suggest this very cautiously because I realize that a) it takes a LOT of time to create a tease with so many options, and b) I see that you provided shorter options already, which I haven't explored.

As well, I think that tying the options in together (as an option, not as necessary) would be a neat way to make a "select your own" also a super long tease at the same time. I know other teases have done this and I know from your past teases that you'd be incredible at it. (The "You" ending kind of hints at this, which is what made me think of it. Maybe the others do as well)

Happy to provide more specific feedback in PM if you'd like it - just don't want to spoil anyone's fun here with specifics! These are just constructive thoughts, none of which are as important as:

FANTASTIC TEASE. SO glad you're back, and looking forward (kind of - ha!) to going through the rest of the options.
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I just finished doing all of Nina's part of the tease all the way to the 50/50 chance .. saw no bugs.. and was denied at the end aAGAIN :blush:
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This is fantastic. As others have said, so glad to see another tease by you :) I have only done the Mia section (OUCH!!!) but I will definitely be doing the others. I also like the "more" part as well, curious about being locked up. Might just have to try that once I've done all the girls :)
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There were a few bugs that I noticed so I put it through MWT Edit and found that all of them but one were due to some files being corrupted during download. However, on page "choosemore" the button that says "Tease me" is supposed to go to a page titled "teasestart", which is missing. I can only assume that is supposed to go back to the beginning, but that doesn't make sense to me story-wise. Thanks again!
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Great as usual
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domTanya wrote:@ wishboned: no, that button is just a dead link, i forgot to write that part at the end ;), maybe ill do it the next days
I wondered about that too. I got a laugh out of the idea that the tease was that there was no tease... but somehow I knew there was another branch intended, but not completed.
Thanks again.
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incredible..i have not other words..i selected "your choice" and at the end,damn,that ruined was so cruel :-/ i thought to have a permission to cum

very sadistic..my load came out also after 10 minutes after i finished
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Post by spacerat »

A wonderful tease. Thanks a lot. I just wanted to tell you, that the "tease me" button is broken. But I read that you already know this. I hope you will find the time to write this section :-D
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I like Nina's section
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I thought all of the sections were really well done. If I had to pick my favorite part, it would probably be the Jenny portion.
domTanya wrote:I'm glad a lot of you thought they had permission to cum at the "you" section ;D,
that is whats making for a real ruined orgasm ;)...
I must admit, I fell for this too. I don't know if it was the writing, tone, pictures, etc., but for some reason I didn't expect that ending. Well done!

Regards,

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what is the main pornstars name? the one in the "you" section?!!
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ds13sp21 wrote:what is the main pornstars name? the one in the "you" section?!!
That would be Adrianna Meehan. Mostly famous for Playboy; don't think she is a "pornstar" by most definitions.

http://www.playboy.com/girls/view/adrianna-meehan
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