I have published an original story tease:
"Twin's Surprise" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=22662
This was to a small extent inspired by 1885's "Sibling Rivalry" series in the sense that I had the idea when reading that series.
Comments are welcome. Enjoy!
Twin's Surprise
Twin's Surprise
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Re: Twin's Surprise
It was a good tease. Not your best work but I have high expectations of your teases which are really top notch.
I especially like your work because they feature a lot of girls with amazing legs and I love me some long legs in heels.
Big fan!
I especially like your work because they feature a lot of girls with amazing legs and I love me some long legs in heels.
Big fan!
Re: Twin's Surprise
Thanks for the kind words.
I think that if you are particularly turned on by legs, then you should try writing your own tease that features that...
I think that if you are particularly turned on by legs, then you should try writing your own tease that features that...
Re: Twin's Surprise
Really love your work!
Your writing is one of the best and after every tease I look out to your next
If I were to out just a single note of critisism, it would be that I liked Spooning, Desire, and Denial better because of a more 'natural' atmosphere (sorry, don't really know how to describe it), but this would just be my own opinion anyway...
Still, a very high quality level througout the tease, so please keep them coming
Your writing is one of the best and after every tease I look out to your next
If I were to out just a single note of critisism, it would be that I liked Spooning, Desire, and Denial better because of a more 'natural' atmosphere (sorry, don't really know how to describe it), but this would just be my own opinion anyway...
Still, a very high quality level througout the tease, so please keep them coming
Re: Twin's Surprise
Thanks for the kind words, I appreciate them.bbman wrote:Really love your work!
Your writing is one of the best and after every tease I look out to your next![]()
If I were to out just a single note of critisism, it would be that I liked Spooning, Desire, and Denial better because of a more 'natural' atmosphere (sorry, don't really know how to describe it), but this would just be my own opinion anyway...
Still, a very high quality level througout the tease, so please keep them coming
Twin's Surprise, Part 2
I have just posted a continuation to "Twin's Surprise", which is
"Twin's Surprise, Part 2" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=23243
Enjoy, and comments are welcome.
"Twin's Surprise, Part 2" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=23243
Enjoy, and comments are welcome.
Twin's Surprise, Part 3
I have now posted the conclusion to the "Twin's Surprise" series, which is
"Twin's Surprise, Part 3" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=23706
Let me know if you are surprised! And enjoy!
"Twin's Surprise, Part 3" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=23706
Let me know if you are surprised! And enjoy!
Re: Twin's Surprise
I forgot to say that one obvious element in Part 3 was inspired by Salamando's story Playful Heather. I don't want to say more, so as not to give too much away, but it will be obvious to those who have read Salamando's story.


