It really kind of freaked me out a bit as I was reading it, because it is eerily similar to a tease series that I've been working on over the last few months, too! (Frustrated wife goes away on lust-filled vacation and leaves her husband in the hands of "professional" women who are to "train" him to be a better man.) Maybe there are others like this that I have missed or forgotten? I just know that if I published mine right now, it would really look like I just copied your idea! I want to get quite a bit further in before I release the first part, so that won't be a problem.
But the gist of it is, that I love your idea and your writing style is really great. Very good narrative from Tanner. Better than mine, I'm sure. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent parts. I can't wait to see who the "coach" is!
Welcome to Milovana, and keep it up!
