Great way to punish in a tease

[dragoul]

I stumbled upon a great way to include a punishment in a webtease: (thanks to Danny16)

One the site writeforme.org you can set up a line writing task and only if the task is completed a password is shown. In order to continue the tease this password could be required. So this is a good way to assure, that the task is really done.

Here is an example:
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=1464
(after completing the task fill in anything arbitrary in the form and hit send to see the password)

[Hawkward]

I agree with using this, but also I know of another sneaky use which will be put in spoiler tags since it's an actual legitimate way to mess with your head, and could spoil how you view these punishments...

Spoiler: show

Let's call each punishment Punish 1, 2, 3 and so on....

-Punish 1-
Write 15 lines as the first phase of your punishment
After completion, link the second phase of the punishment, and give it a password like "PasswordForPunishmentPhase2"

-Punish 2-
This time 10 lines, but make it slightly more challenging, include accurate punctuation, increase time penalties (either short keystroke break of 5s for a +1 line, or a large keystroke break of about 20 seconds for an extra 5 lines for example)
After completion, link, and tell them to start the third phase of the punishment and give it a password like "CompletePhase2TenTimesBeforeMovingToFinalPhase

-Punish "3"-
This is where things get interesting, build up this as if it were the last, and final part of the punishment.
However after completion, ask the person that just typed if they really listened to the password, that it was just the key to the final phase, that they read too much into it, and disobeyed the order to move on to Phase 3

They would be linked to the further punishment. Text in this one could be something demotivating like "I will learn never to disobey Mistress/Master order's again."

If the person didn't disobey, they could be rewarded maybe?

The idea behind this being that most people will choose to likely listen to the password, Thus playing a mind game on the one being punished.

[SexualChoc]

with bad typing skills
and struggling to learn words at all

The whole idea of repetition just as a pointless task

never has made sense to me as a turn on


might as well dig a hole and fill it back up again.

[Danny16]

There is certainly a niche of people who get turned on by the repetitive nature of such pointless tasks. However I think it would work best in a tease where the person completing it has already committed to finishing, such as during a series of teases. Most people would just click off if it was in a one off tease or if it was to demanding of a punishment.

[mr-max]

Like the idea but agree with Danny

[Tobias23]

Love the site. Real punishment should be something unpleasant, something the sub doesn't want to do.

One problem, what happens if the site goes down, and then suddenly the tease would not be playable. Would it be possible to gain permission to host it on milovana or even implement it inside nyx?

[mr-max]

I just tried. Have to say, it is tempting to use this. I like tasks in teases. There is this series including math calcuatlions that was also nice.

However it can be VERY frustrating to do that if to complicated or long. Should be used in a decent way!

[aldorax]

That looks like a basic version of FondofWriting, made for the Web. :)

[Hawkward]

That looks like a basic version of FondofWriting, made for the Web. :)

Pretty much my thoughts exactly.

Plus if WriteForMe ever went down, we do have the FOW editor as a backup.

I will admit though, while it's a good punishment, I don't think it should be incorporated so strongly. With sites such as WriteForMe, if we made a mistake, we'd likely cheat our way and restart to get a good result, but if it's too long (anything more than 30-50 lines) it might just lose appeal altogether.

Then there is the rules; what would be more acceptable as completing the punishment? What if mistakes are made? As a nifty penalize system, in this scenario I would personally have the end text after completing to have further commands - i.e. 1-5 mistakes = ???, 6-10 mistakes = ???, more than 10 mistakes = ???

There is of course one other option - Written punishment on a double-sided A4 paper!! :D While "harsh" punishments can be anywhere between 50 and 100+ repetitions, I feel that either one, or two sides of an A4 are enough of a punishment to keep the submissive motivated for the task. The only thing to consider though is that you need to incorporate email, or the forums to post the written work to be judged for clarity.

I just tried. Have to say, it is tempting to use this. I like tasks in teases. There is this series including math calcuatlions that was also nice.

However it can be VERY frustrating to do that if to complicated or long. Should be used in a decent way!

Calculations, huh? Could you elaborate on the idea slightly, please? I'm intrigued, but I don't know what to vision (PM me if it's something you don't want to share publicly).

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I decided to make a sample realistic exercise...
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=1178

[Tristan.nrw]

I'ld never have imagined, that you guys would come up with such a great variety of uses for my tool :)

I set up writeforme.org last year in december - if you have any questions or requests, please feel free to contact me!

Tristan.

[Hawkward]

I'ld never have imagined, that you guys would come up with such a great variety of uses for my tool :)

I set up writeforme.org last year in december - if you have any questions or requests, please feel free to contact me!

Tristan.

The world is certainly full of surprises!

How is the site maintained exactly? It doesn't seem to have any advertisement (then again I'm using ABP). Are you securing the domain out of your own pocket for the sake of making us lowly humans write lines?

Also while I'm at it, what was the ORIGINAL purpose for the site? A site such as writeforme could have a variety of uses be it sexually explicit, or even as a proper punishment, so I'm naturally curious as to its founding idea and whether it was the former, or the latter.

Anyway only part of the posters here have seemed to like this idea, then again it's not exactly going to be everyone's cuppa tea. Hopefully we can get more people on board as to create either some punishment teases and/or teases that incorporate it naturally.

I might give some input at a later date ~

[Tristan.nrw]

It sure is :)

I really don't like the idea of placing ads on that site. I have much server space my company doesn't use and during the holidays I tend to take a quick idea I have and make it happen. Last year it was that site because FOW is a windows-only-tool and I really like the idea of a web app doing something like that, but didn't like LinePunishment too much.

Well... ok. I had the idea and started coding and didn't mind looking for other solutions first - I wanted to learn some more web technology stuff and needed a test project and picked one that was close to what I personally would like to have - when I was half way through I did a google search and linepunishment came up - but I liked my approach better.

I don't intend to make money with it - I am currently developing some bdsm-themed mobile applications and will may be put some links to it on WFM when it's done, but that's it. I have a flattr link though, if you really enjoy it :)

Until that - I enjoy using it myself (part of the system is database that is encrypted in a way that makes it impossible to cheat even for me afaik) so I have fun, too - and I really love the fact that there are so many users on this site.

Although sometimes I hate the encryption and would love to have a nice way of looking at all of your tasks :p Well - may be there is someone out there who will set some up for me, too ;)

[mr-max]

Calculations, huh? Could you elaborate on the idea slightly, please? I'm intrigued, but I don't know what to vision (PM me if it's something you don't want to share publicly)

Sorry, I only saw it right now! ;) claculations were incorporated into the "College tease toy series" The series got deleted lately (such a shame!).

However I found the service:
http://www.thatquiz.org/tq-1/math/arithmetic/
(It can be modified on the left to make it easier harder.)

In the tease I was talking about, it sometime made you have a video in the background just listening to moaning etc. to get distracted or having a video of the girl teasing you visible to make it even worth. Just found out there are even more: http://www.thatquiz.org/

Unfortunately you cannot incorporate a "password" or anything like with the typing tasks.

In general I like the idea to have something challenging to do either to earn a reward or to get punished.
Did anybody do any teases like that lately?

[misstresskane]

Thanks, dragoul, I like this idea!