Apocalypse teases

[painispleasure]

Great tease again. Can't wait for the Mistress Teal tangent since that was the ending I actually got.

And I just want to add that part 2/2.3 is, in my opinion, literally the best tease on this entire site. Kudos.

[Trusfrated]

Agree with Berchen. This (3/3.1) is really one of my favorite teases ever. It covers so many different fetishes if you follow each and every path. And there are SO many paths! Your use of story branching is some of most extensive I've seen before. It was refreshing to take the tease outside for a change, and not be going from room to room like many teases of this sort. It reminded a lot of The Awesome Competition 2 and some parts of the Bermuda Triangle series.

I import with Teaseme then use the debugger to manually change pages so I can follow each and every decision tree. I feel bad for the folks who only see one path and then move on; there's just so much work that went into this!

One more thing: because of the different branches, I kept finding myself thinking: "this section here could have easily been released as just a standalone tease!" There's a couple portions at least that would have been TOTM-worthy, in my opinion.

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My favorite was probably the Dream Sequence (Upstairs portion). The writing there really got to me (in a good way)! My least favorite was probably the shack scene with Faye. I thought the pictures were not up to the quality of the rest of the tease.

Just exemplary work! Thank you!!!

[deamon44]

Thanks to everyone for the feedback it's great to know that you have enjoyed it!

And there are SO many paths! Your use of story branching is some of most extensive I've seen before. It was refreshing to take the tease outside for a change, and not be going from room to room like many teases of this sort.

I have seen alot of teases where you get multiple choices but no matter what option you choose, your path stays the same. Sometimes you will get to see an extra page. So when creating this I wanted the tease to be as interactive as possible, where you choices actualy could alter your path.

The problem with setting it outdoors was finding pictures. I found myself editing sections to suit the pictures. I had actualy planned another ending.

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where you are marched back to the frozen river and fall through the ice. I actually wanted an underwater dream like sequence to finish that section but failed to find any pictures I could relate. Admittedly this was maybe a little too ambitious

My least favorite was probably the shack scene with Faye. I thought the pictures were not up to the quality of the rest of the tease.

I actualy agree in hindsight maybe should of done something a little different. It was a last minute add because I wanted a 'nice, easy' alternate ending option. Originaly was just going to be Alexis. Fayes pictures seemed to fit into the feel of the story at the time.

[d3vi0n]

I couldn't resist to start creating a TeaseMe-Version for Apocalypse 1.

Apocalypse 1 is complete with high resolution images (including some bonus images):

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Thx, for this gread series

[Frozen88]

and I couldn't resist downloading it

[dousque]

Thanks for your work, it's hours and hours of great teasing.

What you created is more than just a tease, it's a setting. I would love to see a "spin-off" series that follows a man with a big dick and how he is used by different females. I like to identify with a toy boy more than with a tiny dick slave. ;) Maybe someone wants to do something like that. Sometimes.

Keep up the great work, thanks!

[CoinZ]

Compared to 2.0 and 2.3 , 3.0/3.1 was a bit let down as 2.0 and 2.3 contained a lot more variety to plain stroke + edge (i only had bit cbt and anal play,maybe my choises were "wrong" at the first time, will play it again at some point) This is great series indeed, just hoping future parts contain more variety at all the paths (if my choises were "wrong")

[dragoul]

Finally I found the time to do the tease. And I really liked it, but I think the other parts were much better, because I think the many possible paths aren't good. Sure it is great, that choices made during the tease, truly affect what's going to happen, but to me this isn't the best way of doing it. And here is why: I did the tease and reached one end. But because I really liked the tease I wanted to see all the other paths as well (plus, the first path alone was a too short for a tease). So after finishing one path, I kept starting over and over again until I had seen all paths. This was unsatisfactory because it completely prevented me from immersing into the story and destroyed the whole atmosphere.

I like it more, if you have to see more or less all pages in order to finish a tease. That doesn't mean, that it has to be done in a predefined order though. I think the way you did it in Part 1 or 2 was much better. And it also doesn't mean, that actions don't affect the tease. I think how you did this in part 1 for example was perfect. Please get back to the style of part 1 and 2 for new teases, those parts are two of the best milovana teases of all time.

[Frozen88]

Gratulation for the tease of the month

Waiting for part 4

[deamon44]

Gratulation for the tease of the month

Waiting for part 4

Thanks frozen88.

I am working on part 4 at the moment. I think I'm only around a 3rd of the way through I'm afraid. This part follows the tagent of staying in the bunker with Ashley. It could be the largest part yet (I suspect it will consist of part 4, 4.1 and 4.2) I just hope it works it ok in the end.

[Frozen88]

[kong]

How's stuff going?

[deamon44]

How's stuff going?

Progress has been slower than I would of liked. A combination of not getting as much time to add to the tease and a sort of 'writers block' I suppose. That said parts 4 and 4.1 are complete. So 4.2 to go. I would think the 3 parts in total will be around 1700 pages.
It is in the same style as part 2 and 2.3.

[Frozen88]

[mangoman]

I don't get why you're creating them in seperate "parts". Like you're finishing 4, 4.1 and 4.2.. why not JUST part 4 with all the three parts combined? I dont get it.