First new tease in awhile
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zerocool99
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First new tease in awhile
Check out trouble, first new tease in awhile and let me know what you think.
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Mz_Teneale
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heya zerocool,
I quite liked your tease, by the look of the vote rating you are getting, i would say that everyone else liked it aswell.
I loved the cock and ball torture, in my honest opinion, cbt is as important as the teasing. You had quite a bit in there which i expected from the title.
However, i am a firm believer in creating a story to tie in with the tease text. Your tease text was great, but there was little or no story to heighten the experience. So if/when you do your next tease, if you incorporated a story into it, i would love it all that much more.
I gave it a 3 out of 5. It was a great tease but you have areas for improvemant. Great Work!!!!
I quite liked your tease, by the look of the vote rating you are getting, i would say that everyone else liked it aswell.
I loved the cock and ball torture, in my honest opinion, cbt is as important as the teasing. You had quite a bit in there which i expected from the title.
However, i am a firm believer in creating a story to tie in with the tease text. Your tease text was great, but there was little or no story to heighten the experience. So if/when you do your next tease, if you incorporated a story into it, i would love it all that much more.
I gave it a 3 out of 5. It was a great tease but you have areas for improvemant. Great Work!!!!
The Mistress From Oz