welcome to the wwe and mistress mickie controls you

[henceworth]

i am just looking to see what sort of feedback i can get form you people :) any ways you think i could improve on future teases or things that i should keep, the star ratings haven't been amazing but for my first two teases i think it is acceptable, anyway any feedback would be welcomed with open arms

[mangoman]

i am just looking to see what sort of feedback i can get form you people :) any ways you think i could improve on future teases or things that i should keep, the star ratings haven't been amazing but for my first two teases i think it is acceptable, anyway any feedback would be welcomed with open arms

hm you know I liked your teases. You could go into detail more if you ask me. and focus on realistic tasks, not like "jerk 10mins to this picture", nobody's gonna do that. :) I really liked the playing of wwe13 though, very creative. your teases could also be longer and/or involve more humiliation and pain. I like that.

Oh and never use Chyna again please.

[henceworth]

hehe i cant promise i won't use chyna again ;), she is a very dominating figure!
yeah i would like to make a longer tease but, they where my first two ideas so i kinda just wanted to just get them written and see how hey went, i am kinda at a dead end end for ideas now though which isnt a good thing :/