FB: Punishment
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Tury
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FB: Punishment
Lots of potential, but the bad grammar/punctuation and calling them "Photo shoots" instead of simply "outfits" nearly killed it for me.
If you have no reason to live, find a reason to keep living.
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SexualChoc
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Re: FB: Punishment
I went through with a spell checker and did edit a few mistakes
and even changed "photo shoot" to outfit.
It is rare that I change spelling, or grammer.
there are a few "mistakes"left in the tease like not capitlizing
oR using Capitals in the Wrong place
but that I will take as artistic licences and part of my poerty writing style.
(note spelling mistakes left in this post on porpoise)
Thank you for the feedback!!!
and even changed "photo shoot" to outfit.
It is rare that I change spelling, or grammer.
there are a few "mistakes"left in the tease like not capitlizing
oR using Capitals in the Wrong place
but that I will take as artistic licences and part of my poerty writing style.
(note spelling mistakes left in this post on porpoise)
Thank you for the feedback!!!
all2true
is my other profile. see my chastity belt link :
http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic ... 16#p139016
is my other profile. see my chastity belt link :
http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic ... 16#p139016
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Sissy_2_B_Used
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Re: FB: Punishment
Love, it crawling on the floor as I type this.