Open for comments. I generally need to know about the delay in the hypnotic sequence. I'm trying to find a good time for 'hypnotic' delays. Does the delay seem adequate or do you feel it's too long or too short?
Also was my first attempt at adding sound. I'll get better at it.
Cheers!
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First let me say thank you for a great piece of work. It was something that I was looking for sometime.
Two points:
1. The length of the hypnotic sequences seemed a little short. They could easily be twice as long. I think it would add to the overall submission.
2. This may be an item that you are unable to address. I found in this work, as with others that require you to focus on a certain body part, that it loses something when you actually have to look away and read. An addition of a female voice would certainly remedy this. I suspect there are inherent problems to that.
Hope that helps in some way. Once again excellent work.
Yea for me. My 1st post.
Two points:
1. The length of the hypnotic sequences seemed a little short. They could easily be twice as long. I think it would add to the overall submission.
2. This may be an item that you are unable to address. I found in this work, as with others that require you to focus on a certain body part, that it loses something when you actually have to look away and read. An addition of a female voice would certainly remedy this. I suspect there are inherent problems to that.
Hope that helps in some way. Once again excellent work.
Yea for me. My 1st post.