Firstly, congrats Frivolous on your first CH-style video tease - a job well done for you very first one. It's pretty apparent that your an assman.
Just a couple of things you may want to change for your next video tease:
- sometimes the round starts off quite abruptly, without any indication of the stroke beat pattern... like, right after the break, it'll fade to black and the first stroke beat appears in less than a second! Might give some future warning.
- I personally like focusing on the action and therefore, I like following the audio with text Stroke Instructions rather than following and watching the Stroke Meter. I don't mind how you scroll the Stroke Instructions but if it scrolled a tad slower and if it were a different color than white (maybe green or purple), that would make it much easier to see.
Other than a few pornstars I really didn't care for (matter of tastes, of course), this was a pretty good effort. Well done.