If you have any feedback to my first tease "Private Tution" let me know in this thread.
Is there anything you really enjoyed in this tease that you'd like to see again?
Are there any flaws/ things that you disliked?
Somehow, I missed that tease when you did it originally. So I'm glad you posted this here. I thought it was really well done, and can't think of any critique to add to it, other than as the other posters mentioned; it could be longer.