Feedback: Downfall

[malibu900]

Just looking for any feedback on the webtease Downfall. It's my first tease so any comments or suggestions would be appreciated.

[someone43]

Fantastic!!

Where can I buy one?!?

[Atmon]

Shorter and sweeter than I would have liked, and my bleeding heart just wanted the first lady, Jessica to run right through (but that's just me and Chrissie could have been the first anyway, [perhaps the black garb added to the sexbot style?]) and I gave it a 5 rating.
I admit I bypassed the links to the other sites, and maybe I ought to run through it again tomorrow and do it properly, because I wish it would have been longer, but guessed at the time that the videos may not have complemented the pictures I had in my mind based on the stills and the text.

The text stood out as above average and I couldn't fault the writing style in anyway. That's one reason it scored a 5 in my books, Malibu. Thanks. Pllease do a sequel when my robotic machinery has been installed...

[malibu900]

Thank you Someone and At mon. I appreciate you support.

Shorter and sweeter than I would have liked, and my bleeding heart just wanted the first lady, Jessica to run right through

Honestly Jessica is my favorite of the three as well. I wish that I could have run the entire tease with her but I was really wanting to incorporate some videos. The model's name is Jessica Jane Clement and she's a British Glam model. Unfortunately she hasn't made any videos so I had to come up with an alternative. Hopefully the other two were still to your liking. They're a couple of my favorites.

[encagedone]

I really liked the first girl the best of the photos, but damn does Heather Vandeven put in 11/10 on the videos. The story is hot too. Good job.

[dubland]

Amazing... sooo much pleasure... THANK YOU, give me 2nd one, can be harder:)!!!!

Dubland