how can i improve my teases?
how can i improve my teases?
Hello, my first tease is called "mommys little slave". I am thinking about doing anpther one, how could i improve it?
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dtspam
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Re: how can i improve my teases?
Just looked at your tease and it seems to contains quite a few ideas for tasks, but it isnt worked out at all.
- Structure your tease better, make a short intro, and if the tease spans over several days, seperate the parts clearly or make multiple teases.
- Use realistic durations. Noone wants to hit ones balls for 2 hours. Doing it probably, your balls would fall of, and otherwise its just boring. You can bring people to torture their balls for 2 hours, but you have to do so running through some storry, motivating them and take breaks...
- The formatting of your text could be nicer, use a paragraph now and then.
- Just work out your ideas better.
- Structure your tease better, make a short intro, and if the tease spans over several days, seperate the parts clearly or make multiple teases.
- Use realistic durations. Noone wants to hit ones balls for 2 hours. Doing it probably, your balls would fall of, and otherwise its just boring. You can bring people to torture their balls for 2 hours, but you have to do so running through some storry, motivating them and take breaks...
- The formatting of your text could be nicer, use a paragraph now and then.
- Just work out your ideas better.
Re: how can i improve my teases?
I agree with everything dtspam said. It also helps if the photos actually fit with the story.
Also the third page says to stay in a chastity belt for one month before returning to the tease... I can't imagine anyone ever doing that.
Also the third page says to stay in a chastity belt for one month before returning to the tease... I can't imagine anyone ever doing that.