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subminpgh wrote:Should have had something like, made us cum to a pic of her. That would have been really humiliating.
subminpgh wrote:I'm glad that I was not the only one to think that way. BTW love the tease. We need more like this
I'd echo both these points. If you get time, please make a sequel or something similar! Really mind-f*cking tease this one! I felt so ashamed after doing it. It really stayed with me!

If anyone uses it, and if Bondageslave36 consented, I'd suggest converting this to use with the CyberMistress program. I know you can have it run a session/tease and have you upload a picture of something or someone...

Again, my thanks! :)
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Truly a great tease, i cried the seciond time, the first time i thought the timers were a bot long, but then the second time it really hit some spot inside of me and started crying, by the end I was so humiliated... I simply loved it, you have a very good writing. Thenk you, I love the mind twisting teases.

Cheers and good luck
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Re: Feedback: Broken Heart Therapy

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uberbear01 wrote:
subminpgh wrote:Should have had something like, made us cum to a pic of her. That would have been really humiliating.
subminpgh wrote:I'm glad that I was not the only one to think that way. BTW love the tease. We need more like this
I'd echo both these points. If you get time, please make a sequel or something similar! Really mind-f*cking tease this one! I felt so ashamed after doing it. It really stayed with me!

If anyone uses it, and if Bondageslave36 consented, I'd suggest converting this to use with the CyberMistress program. I know you can have it run a session/tease and have you upload a picture of something or someone...

Again, my thanks! :)
I am probably going to have a sequel or two, and I am glad it was able to give you a bit of a mindfuck. I only regret giving you guys some kind of warning in my description ;) I have a few ideas when it comes to using a picture of her, or possibly a picture of the two of you together - heh. I just need to make sure I'm not isolating people who don't have that kind of thing.

When you said you felt ashamed and it stayed with you, what do you mean? Did it feel like you had just broken up with her again or what?

Go ahead and feel free to convert it to cybermistress or whatever... I don't really mind, just give credit where credit is due. That's all I ask.

Thanks for the compliment.
drputrido wrote:Truly a great tease, i cried the seciond time, the first time i thought the timers were a bot long, but then the second time it really hit some spot inside of me and started crying, by the end I was so humiliated... I simply loved it, you have a very good writing. Thenk you, I love the mind twisting teases.

Cheers and good luck
Yea, everybody always thinks the timers are long the first time around, but then, the mind gets bored and begins to try and occupy itself with something. So, it will start analyzing what you keep saying then begin to dig up those old feelings. I am glad you are so dedicated to humiliating yourself :) Thanks for the feedback!
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Wow, one of your all time favorites. That is saying something. Thanks a lot!

Just out of curiosity... how long did it take you to cry? Was it on your first time around? What were you doing/repeating when you finally broke down? Were you trying to hold back your tears, or did it just kind of happen? Did it turn you on? Were you able to last until the end of the tease?

By the way, your English is fine!bondageslave36
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To satisfy your curiosity :-)
As I imagined, that she is fucked by her new boyfriend and I have actually introduced me to her facial expression I had to cry.
And yes, it was the first time when I went through the Tease.
I have not even tried to hold back the tears.
Finally, it makes me horny when I felt pain in my heart ...
Of course, the Tease for me could continue much longer.
This mixture of agony and lust make me completely insane.
The idea with the photo to cum on it:
Now that everyone expects that this will happen the next time maybe Tease, I propose to make it perhaps even more original to what relates to the orgasm for the ex ...
Perhaps inject at night in their car door handle, or write a letter to her and cum on it or something ... !?
(And again: sorry for my bad english. I hope you understand what I´m thinkin´) ;-)
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Wow, one of your all time favorites. That is saying something. Thanks a lot!

Just out of curiosity... how long did it take you to cry? Was it on your first time around? What were you doing/repeating when you finally broke down? Were you trying to hold back your tears, or did it just kind of happen? Did it turn you on? Were you able to last until the end of the tease?

By the way, your English is fine!bondageslave36
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Tomboy1 wrote: To satisfy your curiosity :-)
As I imagined, that she is fucked by her new boyfriend and I have actually introduced me to her facial expression I had to cry.
And yes, it was the first time when I went through the Tease.
I have not even tried to hold back the tears.
Finally, it makes me horny when I felt pain in my heart ...
Of course, the Tease for me could continue much longer.
This mixture of agony and lust make me completely insane.
The idea with the photo to cum on it:
Now that everyone expects that this will happen the next time maybe Tease, I propose to make it perhaps even more original to what relates to the orgasm for the ex ...
Perhaps inject at night in their car door handle, or write a letter to her and cum on it or something ... !?
(And again: sorry for my bad english. I hope you understand what I´m thinkin´) ;-)
I also thought the tease could have been a bit longer, but perhaps that will happen next time. Who knows ;)

I also agree with you about everybody expecting to have to cum on a picture of her next time... so that is likely why it won't happen. I think it is a great idea, but I also have a few other humiliating ideas that are just as creative. Perhaps it will happen eventually.

As far as cumming on her car door handle or something... that is something I am not interested in making someone do because it is absolutely criminal and is well over a line that I do not wish to cross. I am sure the folks at milovana wouldn't appreciate it much either. I DO have a few ideas that have potential to be very humiliating without involving an innocent party without her consent.

Thanks a lot for the suggestions and comments!
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Re: Feedback: Broken Heart Therapy

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bondageslave36 wrote:When you said you felt ashamed and it stayed with you, what do you mean? Did it feel like you had just broken up with her again or what?

Go ahead and feel free to convert it to cybermistress or whatever... I don't really mind, just give credit where credit is due. That's all I ask.

Thanks for the compliment.
Well, by "stayed with me", I mean that an hour or two later, I was thinking about what I had been saying and thinking and what the tease had led me to think and do. That was quite tough to deal with in the rational, cold hard light of day - after the horniness, if you know what I'm badly saying!

It didn't make me feel as if I'd just broken up with her, more massive humiliation at the fact that I'm here doing this humiliating tease while she's out there living her life. I actually had dealt with her and I'd moved on, but your tease made me re-visit things and in a totally humiliating manner.

Really well written and conveyed!

I love that you have ideas to make this into a series! Consider me a fan and queuing up outside the store to get in first! lol

Also,
Tomboy wrote:or write a letter to her and cum on it or something ... !?
Man.. that is cruel! Great idea though. But considering how good the first one has been, I have every faith the next one (few) will be ace! Good luck with them and I can't wait! :)
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uberbear01 wrote:
bondageslave36 wrote:When you said you felt ashamed and it stayed with you, what do you mean? Did it feel like you had just broken up with her again or what?

Go ahead and feel free to convert it to cybermistress or whatever... I don't really mind, just give credit where credit is due. That's all I ask.

Thanks for the compliment.
Well, by "stayed with me", I mean that an hour or two later, I was thinking about what I had been saying and thinking and what the tease had led me to think and do. That was quite tough to deal with in the rational, cold hard light of day - after the horniness, if you know what I'm badly saying!

It didn't make me feel as if I'd just broken up with her, more massive humiliation at the fact that I'm here doing this humiliating tease while she's out there living her life. I actually had dealt with her and I'd moved on, but your tease made me re-visit things and in a totally humiliating manner.

Really well written and conveyed!

I love that you have ideas to make this into a series! Consider me a fan and queuing up outside the store to get in first! lol

Also,
Tomboy wrote:or write a letter to her and cum on it or something ... !?
Man.. that is cruel! Great idea though. But considering how good the first one has been, I have every faith the next one (few) will be ace! Good luck with them and I can't wait! :)
I am glad to hear the tease is so effective in accomplishing the thoughts and feeling that I set out to accomplish. Quite honestly, I didn't spend much time writing this one, but now that I know how many people like this kind of thing I will really sit down and dedicate myself to the next one though, so watch out ;) Now I just need to find the time to do so.
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I still can't wait for the sequel to this excellent tease!
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bondageslave36 wrote:I just got done writing this tease. It is my first flash tease and I *think* I did everything properly. Let me know if there are any problems with the tease.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=7756

Please, leave feedback here. I am always open to suggestions and critiques. Even if you merely enjoyed it and wanted to say thanks, reply here and let me know.

I appreciate it!
i never watch these teases only the others...i don't...want to have to wait.
this one...didn't even change after the first pic!!!!!
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uberbear01 wrote:Normally I'm not one for overly long screens, but I actually thought the pacing was perfect. I loved that the length of each panel *forces* you to really dwell on what you're actually saying, and for me, I found myself saying the required sentence for a bit, but then, the impact of what I was saying hit home more. If the panel had of changed before that, I wouldn't have gotten that humiliation buzz type thing. Just my humble opinion!

Spoilery type thing:
As for how I played it, I managed to be good and follow the instructions right up to the end, but I hadn't cried at all, even though what I said *had* hit home. So I said "no" and it took me back to the start and I couldn't hold back lol

Excellent tease, possibly one of my all time favourites, and as someone who is quite picky, that's saying something! Bondageslave36 - thank you for your hard work on this! :)
Exactly!! This was the best one I have ever done. It would be really cool if you could do one that was maybe a slight bit faster and we could input our own pictures into the slide on TeaseMe somehow ? That would be nuts.
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