Feedback: Some mildly evil Fun

[UnRelease]

Sorry, I added a few pages here and there and some of them didn't correctly redirect anymore, it should be fixed now.

[sl.adam]

So sorry about that, I was playing around a little yesterday and I must have totally overlooked that.

It should be fixed now, if you find anything else wrong, let me know.

Thanks for the quick fix, it worked. Loved the tease even more now that I got further in but almost at the end, a Continue button didn't work for me. This was when all girls show up again briefly. The girl whose task was the no touching video orders you to do more OK signs and on that slide, the continue button didn't work.

This is the real tease, right? Getting soooo far in and so turned on and then a button doesn't work. I applaud your evilness, UnRelease!

[aldorax]

Wow.

This was by far one of the absolute BEST teases I've seen here in recent memory.

1) The pace was perfect -- challenging in places but not onerously so. And there was enough variety to keep you interested; how many teases are just "stroke stroke edge edge strok edge rest edge!edge!" and get old real quick? This one had well-placed variety of actions and pace.

2) The script was enough to keep you interested and playful but not so detailed and lengthy that you were trying to read an entire chapter of an erotic novel in 10pt font while trying to do something else.

3) The girls were awesome, but I agree with the comment about the pr0n-star quality of the final series.

4) There were, I think, a few mind-fucks along the way which were nice. The hidden timers were well-used and not obscene in length ... how many teases have we seen with hidden timers for edging that are like 5 minutes w/o anything else on the screen but a single picture? (That's just BORING, imho)

5) The build-up / rest sequences were great and are something many other teases seem to lack. And they weren't just "click to continue when ready" but built into the tease to require something OTHER than stroking -- ie, squeezeing, watching a video, etc. Just like at the gym, you can 'rest' one set of muscles while doing some other gym activity. So again, you 'nailed' it right here, too.

6) Good English spelling, grammar, and dialogue! :) .... I can't tell you how much that can detract from the tease experience.

7) It 'felt' real and genuine ... a lot of other teases feel 'forced' upon you. This one kind of takes you in and moves you along for the rollercoaster ride. I daresay this should be featured as an "intro to webteases" experience for those brand new to the concept that join the site.

Making it through to the end, I had a whole-body feeling that I'd not had in a very long time doing teases, even those I've given high marks to now and then over the years.

Bottom line: This was an EXCELLENT EXCELLENT undertaking!

[horrorvacui]

I'm sorry I don't have much advice... because this was the first tease I've ever done!

All I can say is this was apparently a fantastic introduction to Webteases because now I am hooked. Maybe after I have more experience I'll come back with some creative criticism but all I can say now is that is was great and thank you.

[teasethisguy34]

Hey really enjoyed this tease, one of my favourites ever. Great choice of girls, all of them to my taste ;)
Just right level of difficulty, some relatively easy, some very challenging...

Spoiler: show

...the girl in what looked like a sauna/wooden room was tough :) I could make it through, but only just...

Also, could you tell me the source for the 2 posh girls and the maid? really liked that bit.

Only complaint I could have is yeah, as the others said, the final pictures could have been more 'rewarding'.

Hope you make another one soon, looking forward to it!

[UnRelease]

I'm sorry, I haven't reacted earlier, but haven't been around much lately.

Anyway, I'm happy to announce that I found the same video again and updated the link in the OP as well as within the tease.

Happy teasing.

[prawndiddy]

Looks like a nice straightforward tease. I just started but something came up and I have to go out for a bit, so I can't comment too much, but... One thing that makes things a lot more enjoyable for me is an audio component. Even if you aren't splicing in clips of girls making sounds or talking, even putting in the metronome (or creating your own audio file for the metronomes) for the parts that have directed stroking would be nice (at least for me).

[UnRelease]

I agree completely. Unfortunately, I have yet to figure out how to implement a metronome sound...
If anyone could point me the right way, I would be more than happy to do it.

[prawndiddy]

I agree completely. Unfortunately, I have yet to figure out how to implement a metronome sound...
If anyone could point me the right way, I would be more than happy to do it.

Oh, well I don't know about Nyx but I've seen the XML for the TeaseMe versions that use the built-in metronome. It follows the format of:

<Metronome bpm="60" />

Give it a try?

[UnRelease]

I tried that and any variations of it I could think of, but nothing worked...

[straponcatcher]

I'm in the process of writing my first flashtease. It took some doing, but I found the appropriate format for adding audio components.

You have to upload the audio files in MP3 format (music, voice, metronome, etc...) as you uploaded each image you used in the tease. They will populate in the media tab along with all of your images. Note: any spaces present in the uploaded file name wil be replaced with a hyphen (i.e. "metronome 1.mp3" will be uploaded and stored as "metronome-1.mp3"). It is important that you remember this.

After you've completely finished editing the Visual tab for any given page and saved it, you have to click on the script tab. It is important that you've completed the visual editor, because if you have an audio file attached to a page and you edit the visual component, the audio file script will be deleted when you save it.

Find the script for the page that you wish to add the audio to. At the end of the page will be something similar to the following (substituting the pic file and buttons, etc... for your own;


pic("garden-(3).jpg"),
buttons(Garden#, "Try to remember")
);

To add the uploaded audio file (in this case we'll use metronome 1), you must insert the following with a comma at the end of the preceeding line;

hidden:sound(id:'metronome-1.mp3')


Now the placement is key here. adding the examples together properly in this case would look like this...

pic("garden-(3).jpg"),
buttons(Garden#, "Try to remember"),
hidden:sound(id:'metronome-1.mp3')
);

This should do it. Hopefully I explained it clear enough...

[straponcatcher]

Oh yeah. I forgot to mention...

This takes forever! Good luck if you plan to add a lot of audio components...

[ardvark]

I played this with a Fleshlight and an Aneros massager. Sweet jesus did it ever get intense. The slow stroking really frustrated me and when I wasn't able to stroke at all was pure torture. I loved it. Played it yesterday. Make more! Also, make some for Fleshlight users. It gets really really really hard with those so lower the difficulty a tad :p

[Chico]

just re-discovered this tease and what a great tease it is

thanks,

Chico

[SexyTom]

I love that tease too. Will there be a part 2? ;)