You're free to provide your constructive criticism here. I promise not to be discouraged by it. Really. Here, I'll start:
It's annoying that the URL's aren't links and the teasee can't copy-paste them into another browser window
Feedback on Time for your lesson
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Re: Feedback on Time for your lesson
HA Ha
I laughed so hard
I could not stroke properly
Could you do one in German? or French?
You know like, basic language classes
for the novice speaker?
I loved the idea
Silly
Very creative
I laughed so hard
I could not stroke properly
Could you do one in German? or French?
You know like, basic language classes
for the novice speaker?
I loved the idea
Silly
Very creative
to thine own self be true
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Re: Feedback on Time for your lesson
Your not a looser, eteased. Much needed, and sexy too. Good stuff, thanks!
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Re: Feedback on Time for your lesson
I realy like you're webtease. Nice to know its both entertainig and educational. Only what about the loosers who enjoy cbt?

Re: Feedback on Time for your lesson
great stuff - and well put together. Are sure you're correct on the grammer though? My education has taught me that the sentence "send it on it's way" is correct, rather than no apostrophe - as the "way" belongs to "it". Am I wrong?
Re: Feedback on Time for your lesson
"If you're being possessive, it's just I-T-S; if it's meant to be a conjunction it's I-T-apostrophe-S". Strong Bad says so :)Griffyn wrote:great stuff - and well put together. Are sure you're correct on the grammer though? My education has taught me that the sentence "send it on it's way" is correct, rather than no apostrophe - as the "way" belongs to "it". Am I wrong?
Re: Feedback on Time for your lesson
Glad to see that people are enjoying the tease. I didn't want it to seem too preachy or anything.
Could I do one in French or German? I don't think that would go well, as I know very very little of either language and would probably butcher them worse than people do with English. Hmmm, maybe some sort of very basic vocabulary quiz would be possible, though...
As for Griffyn's comment, I'm sure there are some grammar issues in the tease, but I tried to be extremely careful with the questions themselves. "It's" means "it is." You wouldn't say "He is on he's way," and you shouldn't write "it is on it's way," either.
Could I do one in French or German? I don't think that would go well, as I know very very little of either language and would probably butcher them worse than people do with English. Hmmm, maybe some sort of very basic vocabulary quiz would be possible, though...
As for Griffyn's comment, I'm sure there are some grammar issues in the tease, but I tried to be extremely careful with the questions themselves. "It's" means "it is." You wouldn't say "He is on he's way," and you shouldn't write "it is on it's way," either.

