Feedback for Three Tests, then release?

[t&d&cbt4me]

Hi,

I tried this tease today, and wanted to thank you for a job pretty well done. However, when I reached the end of the part with the 3 Mistresses on the beach, I got a black screen and the tease froze. I'll try it again later to see if it was just a one time glitch, but I wanted to let you know.

Thanks again :)

[.Andre.]

Hey,
first at all thank you for this post. Only with your help it can be possible to find mistakes in the webtease.

But in your case, t&d&cbt4me, i can not find the problem. I just opend the flash-webtease editor and went throug the part with the three mistresses. Nothing froze in.

So: Has anybody else this problem, or found another one?
I'll try to correct every bug you tell me here or per PM!

[t&d&cbt4me]

Ok, like I said I would, I went back and tried again. This time, I got all the way through, and all I can say is "Wow!!". Very nicely done. My only thing that I would have liked to see different would be more varied pictures of the models. The girl sitting on the stool is gorgeous, but all those screens of that same picture were too many I thought. Same with the last girl. Some different poses would have kept the visual interest higher, I think, but YMMV.

Very good job :)

[Haldirkd]

wow great tease! a new favorite, hope to see more of that sort.

[all2true]

Thiw was a very hot tease

I have tried it twice
and failed both times.
Failing, meaning having to stop earlier
I will have to work on my stamina

Very well written
Wish i could vote on it.
Thanks

[Quazwierdcev283]

I will need to go through it again before I can give a true comment but I just want to know, what does YMMV mean? Just curious, thanks.

[.Andre.]

@t&d&cbt4me:
Good to know that it seems to work now. It was a damn work to find the mistakes.
Your advice with the picures is right. I'll try to use more different photos in my next webtease.

@all2true:
I didn't went through my webtease - only to find pictures, but not with stroking and so on.
I hope it is not too difficult, but if it is I just can say: Your problem.^^
So you have a new challenge now.^^

@ you all:
Thanks for the feedback!!!