Explore the fashion catalogue

[cumping]

Hello,

I would like your feedback.

I hope, that the missing sound is the only bug. If you find some other bugs. Please tell me.

It is about stroking, edging and maybe cumming in the end.

Your cumping

[LittleElfBoy]

1. The tease asked me if I find bikini girls, I was redirected to the start as I clicked No.

2. The tease feels incredibly bland. It's basically tasks for jerking to clothing models. No story, no character and it seems when you don't find a certain girl, the tease just throws out stuff like "jerk to a random girl x times"

3. 2 stars because the tease is otherwise accomplishing what it's supposed to do and I am for new ideas and approaches to teases, even If I dislike them.

[cumping]

1. I fixed it.

2. The tease have 2 response, if you do not find a girl. The first is what you discribed. The other is to skip the girl and giving the next task.

I think about pain, if you do not find a girl. But then my idea was, that it maybe is not a good idea for my first tease. I try to find a way to keep it simple so that everybody can enjoy it. Maybe an absolute wrong idea, because that makes it boring. But otherwise I am not a great story teller I think and maybe it is less important to me.

I have an example an other idea I have and I think, it would be a great tease for me is: The postman(you) goes from home to home and so he meets different girls, who gives him instructions how to stroke it and maybe here and there is a girl with a special wish. And finally the last girl says: I am a cum eater. Give me your load. Great tease for my taste.

3. Thank you.

[LittleElfBoy]

What I expect in a webtease is that you can actually imagine yourself to be "in" the tease. Your ideas seem fine, but take a look at other teases and how they convey the feeling of being there.

[jpdoggy]

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[cumping]

I will try it better next time.
But first I have to look if there are pictures in the milovana stock I like and I find I can create a story with.

[PedroZorro]

I think that using a fashion catalogue makes the tease not to be a stand alone one. But the idea is rather good. It make me remember when I was a teen and I used to jerk off to my mother's fashion magazines.