FB: Meet Goddess Lisa Ann

[Slaveboy90]

Hey,

this is my first flash tease, and a start of a new series. Every kind of criticism is welcome. Please tell me here your opinion and what I could do better. If you find mistakes in grammar pls tell me, english is not my first language :) If you have a special wish what should coming in the next tease, you can post it here too. So you can control the story a little bit if you want ;)

Hope you like it !

[Quiet Linda]

Welcome

[sleepysub]

the link at the end doesnt seem to be working... sadly Liked it otherwise, I like the references to doggy and such :)

[Slaveboy90]

The link is working ... tested it right now ! try again ;)

In the next parts there will be more stroking. And I will try to make the tease more complex ;)

[sleepysub]

okies

*restarts the tease to play it again* :D

EDIT: I am getting an 500 internal server error when I go to that link :(

[Slaveboy90]

Hmmm...for me it works...how can i embed a video in the tease ? maybe than it will work

Edit: change the link, maybe now it works. I have try to embed a video direct in the tease (with the thread
"Nyx(Flash Tease Editor) Tips and Tricks") but it doesn´t work...I will try to fix it !

[sleepysub]

yea video embedding seems a bit tricky and I dont think you should bother with that as its quite buggy and not officially supported I think.

The new link works however and very much looking forward to more of the teases!

[Slaveboy90]

I am working on part 2 right now. Will be more stroking this time (I think thats the main point for the bad rating)

[sleepysub]

part 2 seems to have an endless loop with th page "Now smack as fast as you can! remember the guy in the basement... [more]"

loved it so far though :)

[redfred]

part 2 seems to have an endless loop with th page "Now smack as fast as you can! remember the guy in the basement... [more]"

loved it so far though :)

same thing for me .. endless loop part 2 on page that begins "Now smack as fast as you can! "

[inri2k6]

I like your style of webtease. Liked your Lanny series as well. Please continue making them.

[Slaveboy90]

Loop is fixed !

Thanks for your posts :) Glad to hear you like it !

[KC83]

I really like the storyline and the direction this is going.

I would like to see more pictures, it seems like we look at each picture for a very long time.

Also each of the teases seemed very short.

As far as what I would like to see in the future. I really like nipple torture and pain.