Feedback: Becoming Self-Employed [TeaseMe]

[pussypoison]

I've just build my first tease:

Becoming Self-Employed

Your government offers interesting new job-opportunities for freelancer. But do you have what it takes? They will put you through your paces, that's for sure...

"Becoming Self-Employed" is a story-driven, video-based, off-line tease for TeaseMe. For the latest version of TeaseMe and how to get and install it, please visit: http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=6993. If you have TeaseMe installed, just download the file "BecomingSelfEmployed.zip", un-zip, copy the xml-file "becoming_self_employed.xml" as well as the "bse1" folder in your "Teases" directory and start TeaseMe.

"Becoming Self-Employed" is for men, female-top. It contains verbal humiliation, cfnm and a lot of virtual sex. However, there is no "legal" way for cumming, so this tease should render you blue-balled and horny as hell. Could be played with or without metronome. Contains several jump-points if you have to re-start it. Could be played with Fleshlight. Play time is about one hour.

Because Mediafire is now limited to 200MB, I've uploaded it to rapidgator. I hope, that's OK for all:

Downlod-URL: http://rapidgator.net/file/62247738/bec ... d.zip.html

Please give feedback and report any bugs.

Thank you, enjoy!
pussypoison

[Pea17Nut17]

Thanks for the tease. You are missing the folder "s0" which is creating an error message in the "Relax!" "Come in!" portion of the tease.

[pussypoison]

Uuups...

But for me, the uplodad zip-file looks fine. There should be one folder named "bse1", that contains five sub-folder, "s0" to "s4". The entire zip file should have about 254 MB. And that's what rapidgator shows me.

So, where to you get the error-message? Do see any pic of Chanel Preston? Could you use the jump-page to start the tease with the next scene (Asa Akira, Devon Lee)?

Just in the moment I can't see why it does not work for you.

Sorry, anyway

[Pea17Nut17]

I only had folders s1-s4 and street however I redownloaded it and have everything. It was possibly an extracting error when I extracted the tease from the zip file.

Thanks!

[pussypoison]

Phew ... thank you for your quick reply. I'm ...um... relieved.

[supermokkori]

Because rapidgator can often suck with download speeds, I put it on iFile/Filecloud as well:

http://filecloud.io/wd719sht

[janmb]

For some reason I'm struggling to get those videos to play properly... getting sound only, so obviously an encoding issue.

VLC plays them just fine, but that's irrelevant for teaseme. WMP giving me audio only.

I have installed the very latest K-Lite codec pack and it made no difference.

Any idea what encoding was used for those videos?

[pussypoison]

Sorry to hear that.
I have no trouble to play them with Windows Media Player and KMPlayer for Windows, using Win7. All major player under Linux play them too. I used kdenlive / Ubuntu to cut them. To render them in kdenlive, I chose "for Windows Mediaplayer". I thought that would be the safe side.

KMPlayer gives the following info:

General
Format : AVI
Format/Info : Audio Video Interleave
File size : 7.76 MiB
Duration : 32s 432ms
Overall bit rate : 2 006 Kbps
Writing application : Lavf53.21.0
Video
Format : WMV1
Codec ID : WMV1
Codec ID/Info : Windows Media Video 7
Duration : 32s 432ms
Bit rate : 1 999 Kbps
Width : 854 pixels
Height : 480 pixels
Display aspect ratio : 16:9
Frame rate : 29.970 fps
Resolution : 24 bits
Bits/(Pixel*Frame) : 0.163
Stream size : 7.73 MiB (100%)

So, it seems, what you need is WMV1, Windows Media Video 7 resp. IMHOP it's something from Mircosoft.

[ben2202]

Best teaseme by far in my humble opinion , loved the red screen effect for the nylon scene thought it would come back at the end.... The repeat cut scenes where amazing being generous in quality and quantity, excellent "staff" choices. Only drawback was a lack of intensity for the final scene , it did not feel intense or at least has intense compared too the other scenes.

Cant stress enough your amazing skill for the repeat cut scenes , just the right timing and REALLY intense unlike well most teaseme teases, a truly needed breath of fresh air and dare i say a new standard that hopefully will be emulated and perfected. Nothing shorter in, again, my humble opinion.

[janmb]

So, it seems, what you need is WMV1, Windows Media Video 7 resp. IMHOP it's something from Mircosoft.

Thanks for the info.

Found the problem and solution, and in my opinion this is rather precious lol:

WMV is, as you say, Microsofts own codec and definitely supported in any windows version this side of 2000. I run win7 myself.

The problem was ironically this: Windows Media Player apparently expects WMV content in .wmv files, and not encapsulated in .avi files. Other, sensible players obviously have no problems reading a header and seeing the fact that is is WMV content, but Microsofts own bloody player fails to do so - at least on my system.

Renaming the file to wmv solved it - but should definitely not been necessary.

So in short: Nothing wrong from your side, nothing wrong from my side, lets all laugh at MS

[pussypoison]

@aucun, ben: Thank you for your warm words.

@all:
My tease rates about 3.8 That's not really bad but it's not really good, too. So, what could I do better? What do you like, what not? Is it too much virtual sex and too little teasing? Wrong girls, wrong pics? Bad English? Or is it the story?

I'm working on a second part. I would really appreciate a bit more feedback. What should I keep, what should I change?

[janmb]

I couldn't rate it at all until now since my video issue, but I've played around with it some more now...

I think it's a great tease - not perfect, not the best ever made on this site, but definitely in the top league.

Don't worry about the ranks imo - 3.8 is very good, especially for a TeaseMe tease... All placeholder teases always suffer a bit on rank because of the n00bs who don't bother reading the description, expect to find an online tease and rate it low in disappointment. 3.8 means you have gotten a LOT of 5s.

Also, getting enough 5s to rank above 4.0 means you need to always cater to the broadest possible audience and make sure never to make anything very special at all, since whenever you miss the personal preferences and tastes of each individual user, you get a lower vote. In short, caring too much about getting a high average rate can in fact be bad for your creativity and making you do way too many compromises. Don't worry about rating imo


Feedback for my own part (I generally liked the tease very much, the comments below are given with intention of driving improvement only):

I love videos in teaseme teases - it gives them another level compared to any other tease type.

In this particular case though, especially combined with the 3-sec stop-animation pages, it gets a little "noisy" at times. The idea with repeating a short pattern several times in each video is good, but there is room for improvement there. The short cycles are a bit noisy, and the longer repeats with smooth transitions are a lot better.

Looking forward to the next installment

How about mixing it up a little with some edges/edge holding here and there? Also makes the stamina parts a lot harder

[egofed]

Awesome! Only one titfuck though?!? Can't wait for the sequel.

[spdrmn55]

Can you reupload? Rapidgator says file not found. Thanks

[Trusfrated]

Can you reupload? Rapidgator says file not found. Thanks

The following link appears to still be good.

Because rapidgator can often suck with download speeds, I put it on iFile/Filecloud as well:

http://filecloud.io/wd719sht