Feedback for 'Ex Girlfriend Help'

[Curious101]

Hello all,

I really enjoyed this tease... If 'enjoyed' is the right word!

It is well written, and I would like if this became a series.

However, the tease did seem to weaken closer to the end, as if the author was in a slight rush.

I'd like it if future teases had more varied activities. The 'feet' and '30 jobs' parts were interesting, as was the 'cock' part. More like this would be good. More activities to do in 'her' honour, and more finding specific pictures would be good.

I rated it a 5 as it was well-written and fresh :)... and avoided too much anal play or CBT

[indica]

I'd also be pleased if it became a series.

[uberbear01]

Hi guys!

I'm greatful for the feedback but mostly I'm glad you guys seemed to have enjoy it!

@curious101 - very valid about the ending, in retrospect I may have rushed it, yes. I wasn't quite sure about the marriage thing at the time and I cringe slightly now thinking about it! Ha! My hope was that the person viewing it would be fairly pent up by then and it might be a tad more doable. Is that the part you referred to as 'feet'?

@Indica - my concern about making a series out of it would be keeping it fresh. I'd have no objections really other than that. If i can think of some new ways around this I'll definitely have a look.

But thanks both you for taking the time to put this down! Much appreciated! :)

[uberbear01]

Also, thanks so much for the 5 star rating, curious101! I think that's probably a first for me :)

[Curious101]

There was nothing wrong with the 'feet' part - a little unusual but there are weirder things on milovana!

More integration with facebook would have been good. Not to plug my own thread, but the links I list here have some very good ideas! http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=9919

I'd love a sequel, with more than just saying phrases :)

[indica]

Yeah those are interesting ideas, but not everyone has facebook. I guess most people do, but it could still limit the effectiveness of the tease.

Also, you should check out pigjoy's teases for some very creative stuff, might give you some ideas: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/#author=12040

[uberbear01]

Okay, will do, thanks Indica!