Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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chronicbater
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Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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Hi All,
My new tease is up and I'd appreciate any feedback, especially suggestions for improvements in future teases. Thanks for checking it out.
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Re: Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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Nicely written tease, although its not really my favourite type of scenario, but thats just me.

Well done :-)
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Re: Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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First tease?

welcome!
I want to thank you for the tease
I apprecaite you adding something to Milovana

Feel free to do more!
Write stuff you like!
I encourage people to use their own style
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Re: Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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all2true, I wasn't knocking the author, I thought it was great, just not my cup of tea, but hey, if everyone catered for just one persons likes/dislikes then this place would get pretty boring :-D

Keep it up!
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all2true wrote:First tease?

welcome!
Mr. Chronicbater has been around for quite awhile.

He turned a whole lot of us into Raven's Plaything, for instance.
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"I understand integrity. But, gads…how often does a guy get paid a princely sum of money to deflower a virgin, then turn around and fuck her willing and experienced older sister – all in the same day?!"


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Re: Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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slavechylde wrote:
all2true wrote:First tease?

welcome!
Mr. Chronicbater has been around for quite awhile.

He turned a whole lot of us into Raven's Plaything, for instance.

BTW...that's one wicked woman in your tease.

I mean that in a good way. :-)
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"I understand integrity. But, gads…how often does a guy get paid a princely sum of money to deflower a virgin, then turn around and fuck her willing and experienced older sister – all in the same day?!"


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Re: Feedback, Katie Puts You In Your Place

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well its one of my favorites on here.im a big fan of your work keep it up.
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