Feedback: Look don't touch

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Nezhul
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Feedback: Look don't touch

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The main problem of the tease: it is WAY too simple. Consists of some intro pages + 2 pages for look and touch + outro. Basically, there's no game, no tease. You don't really have any delay. You may click the look/touch button several times in a row if you want more pictures. Basically what this tease makes a player do, is jerk off while staring at one single picture, and then cum. And cumming in 1 minute is way too easy. There is no challenge, no game, no tweak in it.

The idea itself is... argueable. It definitely needs more tweaking Way it is now it gives you a shortcut to a boring experience, and there is NOTHING that holds you from using it.

There are too few pictures. Really. And on all of them she's just standing. Pictures are made random, but sometimes when you click "look" you get the same picture that you got for touch = no promiced visuals added. You used like... 2 or 3 pictures for the whole tease, it seems?

I can see the desire to make a tease, but the realization is poor. Better luck next time. :wave:
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