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What did you think about, "Hold it in"

If you haven't seen it, heres the link

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=2452
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i enjoyed it
eteased
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Not to be a jerk, but there were so many spelling and grammar problems in the first sentence of the description of the tease that I lost interest before even starting it.

Your cautch jerking off in this gorgious girls room.
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Post by all2true »

I liked the tease

It worked well for me,
I followed all commands

Well done

Ps. keep the typos
they add flavor to your tease
It makes the tease more Idiomatic,
colloquial, and gives it your fingerprint.
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