FB: The Awesome Competition 2

[Ethereal]

I'll just like to point out when you get the option with Dawson Miller did you mean to make it so we can only choose the shorter session and the other 2 are just there? Or is this a mistake?

[supermokkori]

Just finished it for the first time. Brilliant! :)

Just curious about one thing. Supermokkori mentioned...

Hey Mykki, glad you could finally finish it.

As for your inquiry, I won't tell you EXACTLY where to find it... I will say it's after the the passcoded save point, but before your "event" with the aussie girl. That should be enough.

First off i love the tease its a bit long for my taste but i can get through it. The only problem i seem to be having is everytime i get to the end i seem to run in to a bug....

Thanks jgizzi21 for the kind words and I apologies for some of the buggery that caused your bad experience near the end of the tease.

I found the issues you've reported and have fixed them already. Thanks for pointing it out.

I'll just like to point out when you get the option with Dawson Miller did you mean to make it so we can only choose the shorter session and the other 2 are just there? Or is this a mistake?

Thanks Ethereal! I just fixed the bug - you are supposed to have the options - I just stupidly named the pages incorrectly so they didn't link properly.

Perhaps placing a null button into those pages that would be above the cum button and hence push it down? Just something that if you click doesn't do anything, if that's possible. Obviously, you've still got a lot on your plate with this one (a side effect of making a tease of such epic proportion eh?) so if there are just too many things at a higher priority then this isn't really a big deal.

Hmm.... well, after incorporating the new save point, the higher priority stuff is mostly small bug fixes here and there.

There is that option of inserting an "empty button" to create that space - just have to be careful with the copy & paste process to make sure I don't bug it up. Not making any promises, but if no major bug issues come up in the next couple of days, I'll see about incorporating the "blank" button. My only concern is, if a first time player sees the blank button, they might wonder why there's a button that doesn't do anything in this tease? Then they'll call me dumb for putting a useless button in my teases. And then, I'll be sad.

Thanks again all for reporting the bugs!

[Terrikk]

The tease is awesome, definitely one of my favorites. The passworded save point and shortened first round made the length bit more sensible, although I kinda like the fact that it's so long.

I did find few more bugs:

Spoiler: show

During the second time you meet the "newbie" girl, the continue button after the scene doesn't work, forced to wait untill the countdown is done because of it, unfortunately don't know the models so can't be more specific.

Beat sounds were missing from few spots, but Faye ending didn't have any beat sounds at all.

Also there's a mislabeled Cumming! button during the first meeting with Rachel, instead it's just labeled Button 1.

Also I was wondering why wasn't Brittany from the intro on the Island?

[supermokkori]

The tease is awesome, definitely one of my favorites. The passworded save point and shortened first round made the length bit more sensible, although I kinda like the fact that it's so long.

I did find few more bugs...

Thanks Terrikk - the continue bug is fixed now and the buttons are labeled properly now.

Double checked the sounds, and the sound files are all there and linked. Sometimes Nyx will have a "hiccup" where sounds/images don't play right/won't show... this is usually because of high usage on the site.

Sadly, the girl you inquired didn't do anything more than that set of images I used. So, that's the main reason why she doesn't appear again in the tease.

[janmb]

Great work mokk! An easy 5 from me.

Can't wait to test the teaseme version when you get that far... A couple, rather obvious ideas in the spoiler below

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I assume most the the sound tracks you have used comes from videos... If so, instead of still picture with sound, consider playing the actual video clip for each page instead. Obviously unthinkable in Nyx, but in teaseme it's quite easy.

For the gauntlets, the last task for each girl transitions into the door page very sudden.... Then again I guess it kinda has to be that way to keep the pace up.

Also, a few more save points, typically after round 2 and 3 would be handy

[supermokkori]

Great work mokk! An easy 5 from me.

Can't wait to test the teaseme version when you get that far... A couple, rather obvious ideas in the spoiler below ...

hey janmb, thanks for fine comments and feedback.

As for the TeaseMe version - and I think it's ok to talk about it outside of spoiler tags - the sounds I used all did originate from videos. HOWEVER, the sheer number of video clips well - it would be just too much hassle from my lazy end! I suppose I could simplify it, but then there's the concern of having the proper beats play and... well, it's a combination of adding too much stuff I want to do and me being lazy.

That said, I am going to experiment with a few things in the TeaseMe version, so it'll be a bit more different than the original FlashTease version.

As to your question about the "gauntlets", it's basically an homage to Uberman's "gauntlet" in the original Awesome Competition. So i've just kept it basically the same - except the encounters are random and there's more than one "gauntlet".

You'll probably be disappointed to hear this - I don't plan to add anymore save points. I think the one passcoded save point right after Round 1 is the only one I'll have - otherwise, it starts messing with decision choices later in the tease. Plus, I don't want to make it THAT easy!

Thanks again for the feedback.

[janmb]

Lazy: Completely understand that one - heck, I'm too lazy to even finish my own first tease yet....

Save points: Agreed, adding more would be convenient and probably too convenient

[Humblest]

I had a chance to go through the tease once and I can only say: Awesome Competition 2 = Awesome Tease! In fact, I am going to say that from my perspective this is the best flash tease yet, bar none.

Personally, I actually love the fact that the tease is so long - the length just makes it even more awesome. I also like the use of the voices of the girls, the combination of creative and normal types of teasing, the excellent production values, the choice of girls... well, it is hard to name it all, since when something is excellent all around, it can be difficult to pick the best features.

Thank you for making this tease!

As to bugs/mistakes, here is a list of the ones I have encountered:

(note: missing beat reported only when it says stroke to the beat and there is none)

Round 1:
Carolina: spelling mistake - 'verile' should be 'virile'
Lexi: beat missing twice
Girl from Third Movies: beat missing once

Intermission between round 1 and round 2:
Rachel: beat missing several times

Round 2:
Erm, my bug notes say: "Allyssa, without take", but I am not sure what I meant by that...

Round 3:
Carolina: one (or more) missing beat(s)

Round 4:
Emma: grammar mistake - 'you continue you thrust' should be 'you continue to thrust' or 'you continue thrusting'

Faye:
After returning from the bathroom, when she is sitting on the table, the tease stops completely.

Note: I was rather engrossed into the tease, so although I tried looking for bugs/errors/mistakes, well, you know how it is when you are concentrating on something.

[supermokkori]

I had a chance to go through the tease once and I can only say: Awesome Competition 2 = Awesome Tease! In fact, I am going to say that from my perspective this is the best flash tease yet, bar none.

Personally, I actually love the fact that the tease is so long - the length just makes it even more awesome. I also like the use of the voices of the girls, the combination of creative and normal types of teasing, the excellent production values, the choice of girls... well, it is hard to name it all, since when something is excellent all around, it can be difficult to pick the best features.

Thank you for making this tease!

Hey Humblest,

Firstly, thanks for the very kind comments. I may have mentioned it before, but the tease was at least 2 rounds longer in the original version! Not only did I have to pull back to make it shorter so it wasn't so crazy long, but I didn't want to exceed 2000 pages - cuz that would be just insane for me at least. But overall, I'm fairly happy with the result and quite relieved there were only a handful of bad bugs to fix.

s to bugs/mistakes, here is a list of the ones I have encountered:

(note: missing beat reported only when it says stroke to the beat and there is none)

Thanks a bunch for reporting the bugs.

I'll make note of the spelling/grammar errors as well as where the missing beats you've reported. It's odd cuz I fixed the bug in the Faye encounter where it stops when you get back to the table a couple nights ago. I'll double check it in a few - how recent did this happen for you, Humblest?

Anyway, I'm fairly content with how the tease is now and - after fixing the bugs just reported by Humblest - I'll be making this the final version. So, if you have any other tweaks in difficulty or any minor bugs you encounter, please reply quite soon. I plan to make this the final 1.0 version late tonight.

Thanks all again!

[Humblest]

I had a chance to go through the tease once and I can only say: Awesome Competition 2 = Awesome Tease! In fact, I am going to say that from my perspective this is the best flash tease yet, bar none.

Personally, I actually love the fact that the tease is so long - the length just makes it even more awesome. I also like the use of the voices of the girls, the combination of creative and normal types of teasing, the excellent production values, the choice of girls... well, it is hard to name it all, since when something is excellent all around, it can be difficult to pick the best features.

Thank you for making this tease!

Hey Humblest,

Firstly, thanks for the very kind comments. I may have mentioned it before, but the tease was at least 2 rounds longer in the original version! Not only did I have to pull back to make it shorter so it wasn't so crazy long, but I didn't want to exceed 2000 pages - cuz that would be just insane for me at least. But overall, I'm fairly happy with the result and quite relieved there were only a handful of bad bugs to fix.

s to bugs/mistakes, here is a list of the ones I have encountered:

(note: missing beat reported only when it says stroke to the beat and there is none)

Thanks a bunch for reporting the bugs.

I'll make note of the spelling/grammar errors as well as where the missing beats you've reported. It's odd cuz I fixed the bug in the Faye encounter where it stops when you get back to the table a couple nights ago. I'll double check it in a few - how recent did this happen for you, Humblest?

Anyway, I'm fairly content with how the tease is now and - after fixing the bugs just reported by Humblest - I'll be making this the final version. So, if you have any other tweaks in difficulty or any minor bugs you encounter, please reply quite soon. I plan to make this the final 1.0 version late tonight.

Thanks all again!

The Faye encounter stop happened yesterday, but I had originally opened the tease before that in my browser - I just didn't have the privacy to do the tease, so perhaps your update simply did not load into an already opened tease.

[Falkland]

Outstanding work, really one of the best teases on the site. The level of detail is amazing and it's clear you put a lot of effort into it that paid off.

I hate to be selfish but is there any listing of all the girls in the tease? A few of the blondes in the gauntlets are gorgeous but I'm not sure they say their full names. I think one was Mia Bliss?

[supermokkori]

Righto... upgraded/finalized to version 1.0!

Thanks to everyone for helping me out with the bugtesting. Hopefully, I'll be able to get the TeaseMe HD version in the next couple of days.

Outstanding work, really one of the best teases on the site. The level of detail is amazing and it's clear you put a lot of effort into it that paid off.

I hate to be selfish but is there any listing of all the girls in the tease? A few of the blondes in the gauntlets are gorgeous but I'm not sure they say their full names. I think one was Mia Bliss?

Thanks Falkland for your very kind comments.

Mia Bliss (Aka Mia Malkova, Madison Swan) was one of the several blondes in the "gauntlet". Rather than list every single blond (as you have no real reference anyways), if you're really interested in finding out the blondes, PM me a description of the encounter.

Thanks again to all who helped out to make the Awesome Competition 2!

[gavin6768]

replace fail images with cum images XD

[Pontos]

Great work, thanks!

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I lost it in the Gauntlet, Edge-holding with moaning-sound is so evil after hours of stroking

I'm exhausted right now... there were beats missing: once while Lexi cums and the second time after holding the 2nd edge with Al(l)yssa.

[supermokkori]

After some help from d3vi0n, I'm happy and proud to present the TeaseMe version of 'The Awesome Competition 2' HD version!

Fair warning - because of the number of sound files and the high resolution images, the TeaseMe version of 'The Awesome Competition' is HUGE. But to me, well worth it because of the image quality.

As a reminder, all filehost links are interchangeable. So, if you download part 1 from Rapidshare, part 2 from Depositfiles and part 3 from Filecloud.io, ALL 3 parts will extract properly.

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