What story would you like in A maybe new series

[Nezhul]

So I'v been known quite for a while on this site, and one thing bad is I often take on some project and then I throw it in the far corner to rot. I actually have quite a few teases, but I can say I have twice as much unfinished ones, which I don't think will ever be finished.

So I'v decided to make my own series, nothing major, no big scripting and randomness. It'll eb mainly stroking and edging. It'll be focused around one girl that will control your orgasms, and the good thing about making a series is that I need not much time to make a part of it. I'll make a few at first and only then release it (I'v done a few days now).

So one thing I dont really know is what story would it be. I have a few in mind, and I kind of can't really decide which one to pick. Or maybe some of you wanted to see something for a while and can give me a good idea.

Things I'v thought of.
1) You meet a girl in a dream and you don't want to let her go when you wake up and she ends up waking up with you. She turns out to be a succubus, but a nice one, and she's grateful to you for letting her out into real world, and she'll help you with your greatest wish, which, she claims, is being denied.
2) A simple thing: you start an arrangement with the mistress and she controls you. Not much story there.
3)You find a perfect job - someone's willing to pay you for being teased and denied. Just like that. So the story is that you come daily to your mistress's hous to be teased.
4) Completely simple "old-school" tease with no story whatsoever, where girl just plays with you each day. Kinda similar to 2nd variant actually.


So, If anyone would be so good as to say what you do like the most, or suggest your own thing - feel free.

[Tobias23]

2) and 4) are both classics that can work anyday.
3) Sounds a bit unbelievable, what kind of job is that, what does she gain?

I like the 1) best, maybe just because I do love Fantasy. But I would go with something like: "She needs your sexual energy so she can stay alive in this world." That would enforce the feeling that you are doing it for her, and not for her to fulfil a wish of yours. Personal preference of mine.

[Nezhul]

3) well the idea was that she's awfully rich and just wants someone to deny orgasms

[doctorsloth]

I think #1 is the best, along with the pre-mentioned suggestion of her needing your sexual energy to remain in the real world. I think it would be a good change of pace from the so called "classics"

[Nezhul]

I kinda knew you'd go for the succubi stuff guys. It was how I'v made first 2 parts originally, I just wasn't sure if it's too silly.

[janmb]

I definitely second the support for alternative #1 - sounds great to me

Another great tip to keep in mind, which in my opinion is a great way of making a tease interesting and never boring, is the style used by 1885 and ruinedoh lately, where each page is fairly short duration and limited amount of text, and rather break it up across several pages. Several pages reusing the same picture is fine, but keeping the text short and changing more frequently is far better than the old-school teases, where each page could take as much as a minute or more.

[Nezhul]

that's the advice I'm always giving to newbies myself.
I can see there isn't much competition at all, lol.

[edgeallday]

I like the sound of #1 too. The story sounds a little bit like a reversal of "The Maze of Lust" which was a great tease. Instead of going to her world, she comes to yours.