FEEDBACK: I Control Your Chance To Cum

[Nezhul]

now, i didn't have time to do that in the morning, but some things I have in mind.

First of all, seems like a great tease overall. The different beats is definitely great.
What I didn't quite like is the sounds when you are asked to edge. They seem out of place for one thing (different harmonics of the sound). The second one is quite bad too - it's really short and mumbled a bit, and, welll.... I just didn't like them much. As I understand you'r a girl yourself (sorry if I'm wrong) I'd use the opportunity to record your own phrases.

Second thing that could definitely improve the tease is photo consistency, i.e. one round = one girl in the same clothes. It's hotter when you are not looking on random pictures of different girls but when there's some connection.

I understand you can't redo that one already, but that's my thoughts of improving your future works.

[Venus]

Thank you for the feedback.

Your first point is the point that I'm dissatisfied with too. It was quite difficult to find good "edge"-phrases. I don't know which sounds you got, because they are random too, but I think a few of them aren't so bad ;)

To your second point: It was the intention to have random pictures. So every round feels different. Later on in the tease there's the chance of some "specials" where's only one girl teasing. The problem with one girl is that's kinda difficult to create the feeling of randomness, because after each picture you have only a few to pick from. It would look weird if the girl completely undresses and dresses in one or two pages, if you know what I mean.

[vetzaklol]

Really great tease!

However just a question: If you make it to the end, is the chance to cum random? Or do you always get to cum?

[Pontos]

challenging!
Thank you Venus. A little minus point is the text, because it repeats itself.

[Nezhul]

for future reference you may use masks for this. Say you have 2 rounds, each round is a different girl, but you want pictures to be random.
So first of all you get your two sets of pictures, right. Each set you "divide" into a few episodes, like when she has all her clothes on, then when she looses her skirt, etc etc. A few pictures for each set.
You name them distinctively, say
Amy1_1, Amy1_2, Amy1_3.... where Amy1 - is the start of a name for all pictures when she's fully clothed, and _2, _3, _X is the number of the picture in that sub-set.
Now what you do is for the first few pages you use
pic('Amy1_*.jpg')
for the picture line. What it does is it picks a random picture among those starting with "Amy1_". This way you can both make it random enough AND keep it consistent enough so it would feel OK.

[Venus]

Really great tease!

However just a question: If you make it to the end, is the chance to cum random? Or do you always get to cum?

Thank you :)

There is no "real" end. Rachel decides after each round if you are allowed to cum. If she decides that you are not worth it yet, you can decide to play another round to get another chance or you can quit. The longer you play and the more rounds you do the higher the chance to cum.

challenging!
Thank you Venus. A little minus point is the text, because it repeats itself.

Yes the variation of text is a little bit small. My focus in this tease was using sound files, cause it's my first time I'm using them.

for future reference you may use masks for this. [...]

Thanks for the explanation. I'm using one mask already to separate three sets of random pictures.
I keep the way you do the subsets in mind, cause I like that style. :)

[Nezhul]

Also when I'v browsed the tease in the morning it was like 1 minute (2 pages) of stroking, then special rythm and edge. However when I'v got to it it was like 10 minutes of stroking 2bps mostly, which was, well, LONG. I should think about some limits next time you do the tease, because I suspect it could go longer if the random would really be against the player.

[Venus]

Yeah the range command from nyx seems to be a bit weird. I tweaked the chances of the pages a lot until I was satisfied. But still sometimes it chooses the most improbable pages again and again. I wish there were variables and more logic to use

[lionusmc]

Hi Venus....Great tease.

In contrast to some of the other feedback here I love the random girls.....that way if one isn't your speed you get a new one quickly.

Also love the addition of the audio.....only thought would be to have her say more than just the word "edge"....maybe create a phrase or encouragement along with the commmand.

Will play over and over and see how my fate changes.

Thanks

[janmb]

Great work again Venus!

Couple minor feedbacks / questions in the spoiler

Spoiler: show

For the teaseme version:

When a new round starts and you progress to a page range you haven't seen before, the first hit ough to be the very first page in that range and not random - not because it matters, but because the text is clearly meant to introduce the round and it seems awkward to encounter it well into the round and not at the start.

Also, in the later rounds, some of the more programmed sequences seem to repeat a lot, such as the Kayden stroking sequence (T03Kayden*). Running through a more or less programmed sequence like that one several times is so much more noticeable than the fully randomized sequences

[Venus]

Thank you for the feedback.

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In contrast to some of the other feedback here I love the random girls.....that way if one isn't your speed you get a new one quickly.
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Good to hear that someone likes the idea

Couple minor feedbacks / questions in the spoiler

My answer in a spoiler too, just for you! (that rhymes )

Spoiler: show

1. OK, I didn't notice that some text wouldn't fit into later parts of a round. I will take care of such things in future teases.

2. Yes, the randomness... I'll give you the numbers of how likely it is to get Kayden. It's about 18% chance to get an "programmed" tease and for Kayden it's about 6%. So you must be lucky (or unlucky it's a matter of the point of view) to get her several times. These programmed teases are more or less random too, but it's more difficult to notice, because the girl isn't changing ;)

[m1l0v4n4]

tried it yesterday and it was over an hour (had to leave it), today much better length (web tease versions), in the teaseme version can I ask where misc26 is from pls.

thanks

[Venus]

tried it yesterday and it was over an hour (had to leave it), today much better length (web tease versions), in the teaseme version can I ask where misc26 is from pls.
thanks

I have the misc-pics from a forum I'm visiting from time to time. I searched this pic for you. Her name is Bar Rafaeli and here (click!) is a web page where you can find some pictures of her.

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Second: the random choice of ladies doing the teasing seemed to work better for me this time. I'm not sure why that is, although it may have something to do with the "shock" effect that happened once or twice, when having to hold back while stroking steadily, sometimes fast, and suddenly you're faced with a photo that shakes your self control!

Oh yes, that is the feeling I was aiming at, when designing this tease. I'm glad to hear that it's working

Third: I found one of the tease sessions which featured just one girl - in this case, the wonderful Tori Black.

The tease keeps getting better. Thank you, Venus

Thank you too for the feedback.
I'm interested in what you think, when you finally get the permission to cum.

[MrDigital]

VERY nice tease
But I have a problem with "TeaseMe"-Offline tease. I downloaded your tease, but then there is an error, when i click von "hard" - it says the page (1...4) aren't there?!

[Venus]

VERY nice tease
But I have a problem with "TeaseMe"-Offline tease. I downloaded your tease, but then there is an error, when i click von "hard" - it says the page (1...4) aren't there?!

Thanks.
Hmm... Did you download the tease with TeaseMe or did you download the packed HD-version?