Your cuts to next scene are solid and on beat with the music... hopefully you won't go too "cut-crazy" so we can enjoy the girls for more than just a few seconds. ;)
I like and dislike the "stroke beat" sfx you chose. I like how it's higher pitched so it will "stand out" from the music and be clearly heard. At the same time, I'm not too fond of the actual metallic hollow sound of your stroke beat. Splitting hairs, I know.
Lastly, hope you do include the actual audio from the scenes/girl voices from the scene... just be careful to balance the audio levels when you do that and try not to go too crazy with too many sounds at the same time.
Looking forward to the final product... when do you think that will be?
