supermokkori wrote:
It's funny, Incubo - I'm coincidentally faced with the same situation.

The current tease I'm working on it's nearly 45 minutes long - and I'm only 20% done.
I've inserted a few jump points but because certain choices made by the user will change the overall outcomes differently, it's hard for me to place a save point/jump point in the main "meat" of the tease. So I'm faced with either shortening the main part or just continuing with my original plan.
Yeah, see, that's sort of the problem I'm having here as well, sort of. The whole thing is just one story with teasing included of course) and while there are natural break points where I could easily split it into chapters, you sort of lose the "flow" of the tease if you do that and at some points that will (in my opinion) ruin it. Some parts just require a certain level of...excited frustration, I guess is how I'd describe it and if I let you "break" somewhere along the way, you won't have that. Further complicating the matter is that certain choices lead to longer or shorter paths which wreaks havoc on estimating the time it takes to complete.
I've already "given up" on the other project for the time being because it's WAY too complicated and consequently too long for Nyx to handle. I figured I'd save that one for the new software when it comes out, but this one should work just fine in Nyx. Some choices, but not so many that it becomes unwieldy. It's just a question of getting it "right" I suppose. I'm confident it can be done without compromising too much, I just wanted to get an idea of what the community thinks so that I can figure out the most appropriate or enjoyable way to handle it.
I suppose the upshot of splitting it up into parts is that I could add some other elements to it that I've chosen not to for brevity's sake up till now, but I started doing that with the Bermuda series and things quickly got sort of out of control on my part with that and I had to dial it back. So from a writing point of view, not an ideal solution. Causes major head aches trying to keep everything straight through multiple chapters...and hell, even I forget some of the things I wrote before. Can't reasonably expect a reader to remember all of it either.