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What do you think about this tease ?

Continue it or not ?

I fixed first part that its not back to begining when you click edge and tease is little longer.

I will be happy if you write what woud you want see in the next chapters.
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Post by all2true »

Qwert,

I am always impressed with how difficult it must be to write teases in anouther language

Only a slight suggestion, flashteases can have 40 pages
you might want to make them a bit longer

Do anouther!
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This two teases is introducing teases.

Part three will be longer dont worry.
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You have a wicked mind, I like that ;-)

What is your native language?

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Actually i feel like my mind is ok but i can be wrong :-D .

My native language is polish.

Someone said that nobody is normal to the end.
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Qwert wrote:What do you think about this tease ?

Continue it or not ?

I fixed first part that its not back to begining when you click edge and tease is little longer.

I will be happy if you write what woud you want see in the next chapters.
Hey...you posted some great teases.
I am the critic of teases,and I see your talent.
YOU ARE GREAT!
However...you could put a time or number like,,stroke for 150 times,worm,,..or....,,no mercy for you,now you'll have to stroke to 1 minutes,slave!...
Other then that,I did use your teases with great success....
Your pics are great,and your energy is good.
Keep up the good work,my good man.
But..to instill the sense of urgency, it would be nice if you add the number strokes orders,or the time setup...that would force me to follow it.This is a BIG secret...don't tell them I'd told you.But then...that's my opinion only,no need to attack my opinion.I am a profesional critic,and I am immune to critics.
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I dont have plan to attack your opinion.

You see this series is not about slave but patient. Thats why i don't write anything humilating.
You know you don't be in program for humilate but becouse you have problem with your control.

You are patient you paid for this and you are threated like a patient.

But mayby i will place some more humilating episode in the near future.

Also if my series be accept and now when i see comments i think it is not completly bad i start writing second series more hardcore. Then all people can choose what he likes more.

Third thing about control and commands.
You are forced sometimes to doing something.
If you has task to stroke fast for minute it is control.
I know it isn't much hard for this moment but in the third part what i write now if you are bad boy and cum lot after you start this series you must really work hard to pass exam belive me :-D .

Thanks for good words and your considerations.
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Post by .Andre. »

Yesterday I tried the fourth part. It was wunderful, but after a while I wasn't able to hold it any longer. One stroke to much.^^

Very good work, and I'll try it again...
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