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Card Game and Story

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Game
We played a little game we called "hearts"

She would take a deck of cards without jokers...so that's 52 cards...

She would edge me once and then open a card...I was allowed to come
only when the queen of hearts was drawn...

The really devious part was...I would be blind folded when she
shuffled the pack...so she could slip the queen right at the end of
the pack or wherever she wished...or just shuffle and leave it to
fate...

Further more if more than half the pack had gone by without the queen
of hearts being drawn...I had the choice to call for a shuffle...but
if this time the queen of hearts was one of the last 10 cards...then:
I would not be allowed to have an orgasm that night.

She would count the number of hearts in the half deck and make me do
that many edges to myself while she watched.

Then she would do those many edges to me as well.

So if the queen of hearts was say the 9th card to open from the
bottom...the game would stop and shed count ALL the hearts of the half
deck opened or not.


Story
This one night...shed just allowed me an orgasm the previous night and
she said she really felt she shouldn't have...so she was going to
cover up for it...

We played this game...usually she would stroke me fast and get me to
the edge during the game...this time she used a cock-ring to make it
worse and started out with slow strokes...driving me insane with
lust...then she gave me a blowjobs while I had to go down on her in a
69...this went on till we reached half the deck...I obviously opted to
shuffle...

She smiled her wicked smile and blind-folded me before shuffling!
Then the torture resumed...she started fucking me slowly...grinding
and getting herself off...getting more aroused with every edge I had
to endure...I had totally lost track by this point of the cards that
had opened...

She suddenly got off me and opened the last card...a queen of
hearts...she giggled and said your queen wasn't very forgiving
today...she then counted the cards for hearts...all 13 were in the
half deck!!

She said I think there should be an added penalty for such bad 'luck'.
So I think you'll do 20 edges while I watch with slow strokes and a
loose grip...then I'll edge you 20 times while fucking you...and no
orgasm tonight or tomorrow night...but you'll the same 20 edges and
I'll do the same 20 to you as well tomorrow...then we play the game
again day after to decide if you get any relief...

2 tortuous and insanely frustrating days filled with slow 4secs per
stroke handjobs and feather works on my cock and nipples as well as
blowjobs where she would tie me up so I could move only 2 inches and
stay perfectly still with my cock in her mouth...and sitting on my
cock with it buried inside her but just slowly grinding...and 20 edges
of these types as well as 20 I had to do to myself we reached the day
I was allowed to play again for an orgasm...

She said she wanted to play a variation to the game...every time I
opened a card of clubs she would edge me twice instead of the usual
once.
And she said she would count the 1st half deck for clubs and I must do
those many edges and then she would do those many edges to me and then
I must get her off number of cards divided by 4 times by oral
stimulation in a 69 where she would get to tease me more....

I tried to tell her this was too much so she just started petting my
already twitching leaking member and said ok then we'll play the
normal way in 3 days and let's start with the 20 edges I've to give
you for today...I suddenly started pleading her to play however she
liked...she thought for a while as she tortured me with a quill
feather...as I withered in agonizing frustration...then said ok...I'll
play the new type.

She blind folded and tied me up naked and spread eagled to the bed as
always...and shuffled the deck.
She opened the 1st card which was a clubs! She smiled cruelly and
started with her signature tortuous blowjob and then a slow handjob.
As the half deck came to an end I was quite literally humping the air
for an orgasm...I'd totally lost my mind with lust...she counted the
clubs and showed me each one in the discard pile...which was....all 13
ofcourse!!! And so started my horrible punishment...she said I don't
think you have enough control to do 13 edges to yourself without
cumming...so instead I'll do 26+4 30 edges to you...4 more for the
extra work...and she began...after the 30 she promptly sat on my face
and said 4 orgasms for me and remember the faster you do them the less
you get teased...and she started giving me an insanely pleasurable
full blowjob...I went crazy on her and got her to an O as fast as
possible...even then I had to suffer 5 edges...the 2nd took her longer
and I went through 6 cruel edges and the 3rd and 4th I managed to give
her multiple Os but she used her tongue on my cock-head to give me 8
more edges....

She then re-shuffled the deck and we started again...
The 1st card was a diamonds...she now started edging me by sitting on
my cock and grinding slowly...or with slow licks from the bottom to
the tip...as we neared the last 10 cards I started getting
worried....the queen still hadn't come up...as we reached the 10th
card I screamed in frustration as I saw an ace of hearts open...I
looked at her with pleading eyes...
She got up...wore her white panties...fired up the vib and had an
orgasm as I had to watch in frustration...she then removed her panties
and stuffed them into my mouth inside-out crotch first...my head
exploded in an intoxicating smell of her jucies as I felt a new kind
of animalistic lust...then she resumed edging me...I could only moan
through the gag...as we got through the next 9 edges...she picked up
the last card and bought it up to me...it was a queen of hearts...she
then counted the hearts in the deck which totaled to 13...
She said aah so even worse luck tonight....well the usual 20 by me and
20 to yourself...oh but you can't do any yourself...so I'll do em for
you but I'll do 25....so 45 to go...and she started extremely fast
strokes to get me to the edge which almost made me pass out with
pleasure after all the slow stroking...she then switched to strong
blowjobs with passionate cock-head licking....then a few were done
with intense hard fucking..... And finally she switched to a feather
for the last one!!! It drove me mad....I couldn't take the slow drawn
out edge after all the fast and intense ones...after she was done...my
cock leaking all over the place...
She started giving me a footjob as she pretended to think...its been a
very frustrating week for you...I'll let you cum I guess...she said
this just as I hit the edge and she let go...she untied me and took me
to the hot tub...she got in with me and re-tied me and filled water
just bellow the massage hose level...she had tied me such that my cock
was pointed straight at a massage hole...she then started playing with
my nipples and balls and turned on the massage pump which sprayed
water with considerable force straight on my cock head...causing me to
moan...ask for permission she said as she smacked my balls as a
warning....I moaned and begged her to allow me to cum...she said hold
it...lemme think...just as I was about to let go and have one she put
the massager off...no she said..I'm horny now...me first
remember....she then made me turn around...she smiled with an evil
glint in her eye and started the massager again...this time it hit my
balls! She said go down on me...I had to stay under water to eat her
out...so it took a LOT longer as I had to keep coming up for air...she
had re-adjusted the massager to tease my cock instead it stimulated it
just enough to edge me and keep me there but not tip me over....after
her mind numbing orgasm...she stopped the massager...turned me around
and put it on extra low...stroked me to the edge and left me to suffer
as it kept me right on the edge but didn't push me over...she left a
watch next to me and said be right back after I put dinner on for
us...

15mins as I tried everything to get off or get away....but nothing
worked...the cruel relentless water massager continued to tickle my
cockhead and kept me right on the tip of an orgasm...but never got me
off...she came back and watched me suffer for a while as I pleaded for
it to stop...she said oh ok I'll stop it...I was gonna increase it and
let you cum but seems you'd rather it stopped...she then put it
off...got me out and dried me up with a towel...all except my cock and
balls...she then tied me up under a shower...she said...this is my
most extreme and cruel form of tease torture...if you can take it for
10mins without begging for it to stop then you get to cum or else we
move on to something else...I shook with need and agreed...

She then started a slow drip straight on my cock...one drop would hit
my cock head and then after a second another...the drip torture was
far worse than anything I could've imagined...I struggled to get
away...to get any kind of respite from it...I then looked at the watch
and realized it had only been a minute...I looked at her and could see
the arousal in her eyes...do you want me to stop she asked...do you
want the frustrating dripping to end? Or maybe a full blast from the
shower to make you cum? She started playing with herself as she said
this and I could tell this new cruelty was driving her nuts...I shook
and endured it in silence for the 1st 5mins then started pleading for
it to stop...I thought to myself another session of cards wouldn't be
as bad! She just laughed and said u just asked for another torture...I
expected it to end after I pleaded but she just let the drip go on for
the rest of the 5mins!!

Now till I think about the next one let's put you back in the
tub...and she tied me up again in the tub and stroked me to edge and
started the massager....as I tethered on the edge...she suddenly got
up put it off and untied me...she took me to the bed after drying me
and put a cock sleeve on me....
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